Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Personification

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21.03.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Wind, Rain, Snow, Thunder or Sun -
 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

3rd place in the contest

- Sun -

                                 I am drying the dews of dawn
                                        in glittering luster
                                        Crystalline clarity
                                  A golden sapphire splendor
                                  that makes you impressed

                                The midday sun, a brilliant blaze
                              where the UV index is at its highest
                       Attempt to avoid me at the most intense hours

                               Watch my nightgown, feminine lace
                                  exquisite colorful embroideries
                                        Always a warm smile
                                  I bringing love to every heart

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Sam Kauffman April 16, 2024 at 10:31 AM Anne-Lise, what wonderful and fresh imagery surrounding each phase of the sun throughout the day! What a delightful, and very unique, way to express the personality of the sun! Each stanza speaks to the rich and life giving essence of the sun in the sun's own words! Congratulations on your win! Hugs and blessings as your days grow longer and hopefully the sun is returning!

Paula Goldsmith April 7, 2024 at 10:03 AM Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this lovely "Sun" write again. Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away...........

Tania Kitchin April 5, 2024 at 4:55 PM Anne-Lise, a charming poem, love the last stanza, congratulations on your winning placement. -Hugs

Valsa George March 26, 2024 at 2:44 AM We feel the power of the mid-day sun. With global warming, summer is becoming so very intolerable in our region. We feel the might of the sun. The beauty of the sun's nightgown is the only thing that gives us some joy these days! Great personification where the sun himself warns of the ultraviolet rays that come down with the beams. Love and Hugs dear Anne Anne-Lise Andresen March 26, 2024 at 2:46 AM - Many thanks for your lovely comment, Valsa :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes March 23, 2024 at 4:03 AM Personification at its best Anne-Lise. Even a warning tucked in there for good measure amid all the wonderful attributes the sun tells of herself. So well done. A lovely poem. Anne-Lise Andresen March 26, 2024 at 2:46 AM - Many thanks for your lovely comment, S.V. :) - hugs

Heidi Sands March 22, 2024 at 1:16 PM Oh wow! This is beautifully written! Loving too. A Fave for me. Hugs :) Anne-Lise Andresen March 26, 2024 at 2:47 AM - Many thanks for your lovely comment and the fave, Heidi :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar March 22, 2024 at 4:10 AM And we accept your love so ready. A wonderful poem. Anne-Lise Andresen March 26, 2024 at 2:47 AM - Many thanks for your lovely comment, Victor :) - hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler March 21, 2024 at 7:21 PM An amazing poem, Anne-Lise. I especially love the final verse, and its vividly lovely images. Good luck in the contest. Anne-Lise Andresen March 26, 2024 at 2:47 AM - Many thanks for your lovely comment, Evelyn :) - hugs

Hilda Greenhough March 21, 2024 at 5:52 PM Sweet phase of the sun, bright and sunny. I like this poem of toasty warmth and summer days. Beautiful. Anne-Lise Andresen March 26, 2024 at 2:48 AM - Many thanks for your lovely comment, Hilda :) - hugs

Eve Roper March 21, 2024 at 4:47 PM beautiful imagery and feeling. bless you my friend Anne-Lise Andresen March 26, 2024 at 2:48 AM - Many thanks for your lovely comment, Eve :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith March 21, 2024 at 1:12 PM I enjoyed reading this lovely "Sun" write. Pretty picture with a wonderful ending. "Good Luck" Hugs... Have blessed day writing away................. Anne-Lise Andresen March 26, 2024 at 2:49 AM - Many thanks for your lovely comment, Paula :) - hugs

Silent One March 21, 2024 at 12:59 PM It was like the sun was talking to me... excellent take on the contest and nice choice... Anne-Lise Andresen March 26, 2024 at 2:49 AM - Many thanks for your lovely comment, S.O. :) - hugs

Jay Narain March 21, 2024 at 11:05 AM nice personification and the picture. A spirited sunshine poem. Anne-Lise Andresen March 26, 2024 at 2:49 AM - Many thanks for your lovely comment, Jay :) - hugs

Frederic Parker March 21, 2024 at 8:16 AM I can tell that your spirit is filled with sunlight, dear poet Anne-Lise Andresen March 26, 2024 at 2:50 AM - Many thanks for your lovely comment, Frederic :) - hugs

Tom Cunningham March 21, 2024 at 6:38 AM It certainly warns us up and raises our spirits. Good luck in the contest Anne-Lise. Hope you are well. Tom Anne-Lise Andresen March 21, 2024 at 6:55 AM - Nice to see you, Tom - Everything is fine here, I hope the same with you :) - Many thanks for your comment and good wishes :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit March 21, 2024 at 6:35 AM This is so very beautiful, Anne-Lise.-- A golden sapphire splendor--Lovely!! Anne-Lise Andresen March 21, 2024 at 6:56 AM - No life without the sun, Vijay - Many thanks for your kind comment :) - hugs

Nancy Kaufman March 21, 2024 at 6:31 AM Hi there Ms. Poetess from the North, I felt the sun's radiance in this one and it certainly seems she's a feminine sun. Best of luck in the contest. It's always a pleasure to have you visit my page as well. Blessings to you.. Anne-Lise Andresen March 21, 2024 at 6:58 AM - I only wish it shone a little more often... today it is grey, wet and windy - Many thanks for your comment, Nancy :) - hugs

Duke Beaufort March 21, 2024 at 6:03 AM Anne-Lise, I am thinking about how lucky we are to have our shining star. It empowers everything we have. It's remarkable to think about and not take it for granted. Many thanks for this one and for the focus on our biggest cheerleader and supporter. Anne-Lise Andresen March 21, 2024 at 7:02 AM - Duke, much appreciate you ... many thanks for all the poems you have read on my site today ... always a pleasure to read your words ... you really are a supporter :) - hugs