Sara Kendrick Poet Ekphrasis

Notes About The Poem

Sun

SUN

Sunset

At days end


Once enjoyed by us

Over our middle years

Time gains momentum on us


"The sun still sets each day, let's enjoy once again."     


Based on oil painting, The Sweetness Of The Sun"
Painted by: Leonid Afremov
Poetry form used: Clarifying Pyramid

For Brian

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Kelly Deschler May 2, 2023 at 10:12 AM Well said, Sara... The years seem to go by faster and faster these days, but there is still time to enjoy a sunset. Sara Kendrick May 2, 2023 at 2:20 PM Yes, there is still time to enjoy a sunset. I hope there is a lovely one today. Thanks for the visit and nice review. Sara

Valsa George April 27, 2023 at 7:17 PM You have painted a sunset.... dear Sara. We all delight in watching the sunset, but wonder how we will enjoy the sunset of our life. Sara Kendrick April 27, 2023 at 11:17 PM Valsa, for us the sunset is not much different from the rest of life except we are older and can't do as much. Thanks for dropping by and taking time to comment. Sara

Andrea Dietrich April 27, 2023 at 4:58 PM love this, Sara. Sara Kendrick April 27, 2023 at 11:16 PM Why, thank you, Andrea. I appreciate you taking the time to comment. Sara

Joanna Daniel April 27, 2023 at 6:48 AM Lovely:) Sara Kendrick April 27, 2023 at 12:58 PM Thanks for the smile, Joanna. I appreciate the visit. Sara

David Mchattie April 24, 2023 at 4:43 PM Who doesn't love a good sunset? It awakens something primal in us. Well penned my friend. Sara Kendrick April 25, 2023 at 4:42 AM Thank you, David. I would hope most people do love a good sunset or even one not so good. Your visit was uplifting. Sara

Sotto Poet April 24, 2023 at 4:18 PM A poem to enjoy in words and visuals, Sara, enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing Sara Kendrick April 25, 2023 at 4:15 AM Lasaad, I am glad you enjoyed reading this one and seeing the picture. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Alexis Y. April 24, 2023 at 1:40 PM Hi Sara, What a lovely painting to go along with your well written poem. I enjoyed this very much. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day:-) Alexis Sara Kendrick April 24, 2023 at 1:55 PM Alexis, I am glad you enjoyed it. I love the smile and best wishes. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2023 at 1:12 PM - A poem to enjoy in words and pictures, Sara ... thank you :) - hugs Sara Kendrick April 24, 2023 at 1:22 PM I am delighted by your comments today. Sara

Daniel Turner April 24, 2023 at 9:53 AM Amen, Mrs Sara. Something I do every day from my porch swing. i enjoyed reading your thoughts today. I trust you had a pleasant weekend. Great to see you:) Sara Kendrick April 24, 2023 at 1:10 PM Thank you for the smiley face, Daniel. The weekend was good, it was colder than last week. I don't mind the cooler weather though. Your visits are uplifting. Sara