Irene Meader Poet Free verse

Sun

Felt the sun end.
Night holding the silky moon on high.
Stars of silver shooting in burning eyes.

Remembering the progress was slightly slowed.
Desires jettisoned and swayed.

The laughs wrong,
The hearts torn.

Bodies together going softly to their end,
But found the sun to rise again.

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Raul Moreno May 3, 2009 at 6:39 PM Irene, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul

Carol Sunshine Brown April 28, 2009 at 6:34 AM Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals Irene. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol

Michael Jordan April 4, 2009 at 10:16 PM Irene - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ

Ernilando Tugaff April 2, 2009 at 3:06 PM Hello Irene, congratulations on your featured write this week my friend. Keep on posting. Ernilando

Vince Suzadail Jr. April 1, 2009 at 8:19 AM Congrats on "Sun" being featured, Irene. Vince

Lena Townsend March 30, 2009 at 8:51 PM Well written with gorgeous imagery. Congratulations on being featured this week. Smiles from Lolita

Sharon Winter March 30, 2009 at 4:52 PM Congratulations on your well deserved featured write of the week! Love, Shar

March 30, 2009 at 12:35 PM Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on having your poem featured to my other comment. Keep on writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen

September 23, 2008 at 5:45 PM Nice use of imagery to forward your thoughts in this poem. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing. Karen