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Sun

Felt the sun end. Night holding the silky moon on high. Stars of silver shooting in burning eyes. Remembering the progress was slightly slowed. Desires jettisoned and swayed. The laughs wrong, The hearts torn. Bodies together going softly to their end, But found the sun to rise again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 5/3/2009 6:39:00 PM
Irene, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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Date: 4/28/2009 6:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals Irene. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/4/2009 10:16:00 PM
Irene - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 4/2/2009 3:06:00 PM
Hello Irene, congratulations on your featured write this week my friend. Keep on posting. Ernilando
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Date: 4/1/2009 8:19:00 AM
Congrats on "Sun" being featured, Irene. Vince
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Date: 3/30/2009 8:51:00 PM
Well written with gorgeous imagery. Congratulations on being featured this week. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/30/2009 4:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured write of the week! Love, Shar
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Date: 3/30/2009 12:35:00 PM
Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on having your poem featured to my other comment. Keep on writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 9/23/2008 5:45:00 PM
Nice use of imagery to forward your thoughts in this poem. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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