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in the sumo ring two wrestlers face each other ~ one almighty clash

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/12/2018 3:53:00 PM
Pound for pound, that's a lot of pounds!!...good write!....80)
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/12/2018 4:04:00 PM
Haha, they're big boys indeed.
Date: 3/12/2018 8:06:00 AM
I have watched on occasion and yes they are big and fit. I am amazed how some of the smaller guys are able to overtake the bigger ones.
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Date: 3/12/2018 8:10:00 AM
Like David and Goliath sometimes, they live in Sumo camps a bit like gladiators really.It started as a religious rite where they'd perform to ensure a good harvest.
Date: 3/11/2018 1:31:00 PM
love this one lots of impact :)
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Date: 3/11/2018 2:35:00 PM
Thanks Eve , yes and lots of headaches' lol
Date: 3/11/2018 10:43:00 AM
Amazes me how agile some of them are, great senryu...
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Date: 3/11/2018 2:28:00 PM
Yes I know Mick, apparently they have strict training camps like gladiators and despite their size are quite fit.
Date: 3/11/2018 8:51:00 AM
Huge Japanese men~about to mash and bend! Great imagery Tom!~Che :)
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Date: 3/11/2018 2:24:00 PM
They're very fit though Cheryl although you wouldn't think it to look at them.
Date: 3/11/2018 8:03:00 AM
Got a chuckle. Might not have suppose to though. Enjoyed reading this one. Sara
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Date: 3/11/2018 2:23:00 PM
Thanks Sara, apparently if their thing thing falls off they get disqualified lol.
Date: 3/11/2018 7:59:00 AM
Yes and one almighty bang!
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Date: 3/11/2018 2:21:00 PM
Haha , I think we've all seen it where they collide, ouch
Date: 3/11/2018 7:54:00 AM
Ha a clash of the Titans - I've seen this in Osaka Japan. A lot of pushing, shoving and belt gripping till one loses his grip and falls off the ring - Quite hilarious actually. You have captured the scene admirably, I commend you...Maria
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Date: 3/11/2018 2:20:00 PM
Thank you Maria, I've seen some bouts on TV, researching it though it is a religious thing and it's supposed to please the gods in ancient times anyway.

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