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Summery Scene

The sun sets on a silvery sea 
Scenic skies beyond shadowy surroundings 
Soft sounds thereof summer's supreme 
So stunning, the picturesque sun settling  
The still surface seems silenced 
Sensational semblance-shown splendid  
Sightseer's sweet subtle scenery 


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Syllable Sequence D. 9,11,8,10,7,9,9 

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Alliterisen-2 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Joseph May 
11/30/2021

Copyright © Charles Messina | Year Posted 2021

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Jan Allison Date: 1/5/2022 5:04:00 PM Dropping back with many congrats on your win Charlie:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 1/2/2022 7:51:00 PM Back with congratulations on your win. Happy New Year my dear friend with lots of hugs and love Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/1/2022 12:00:00 PM Lots of gorgeous S alliterations here, charles. Congrats on a top deserved win. Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 1/1/2022 11:11:00 AM Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful "Summery Scene" write. Have a Blessed Day/New Year........... Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 1/1/2022 8:59:00 AM Well done Charles, Congrats on your win, Happy New Year! Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 12/27/2021 6:47:00 PM Beautiful verse, a winner for sure. Happy New Year my friend Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 12/1/2021 3:19:00 AM Enjoyed reading your alliteration S contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara Login to Reply Charles Messina Date: 12/1/2021 3:37:00 AM Hello dear, Sara. Thank you so much for the encouraging words. Thanks for the visit...Hugs Charlie

L Milton Hankins Date: 11/30/2021 9:49:00 AM Wow! This is extra special. You've taken a very difficult form and raised it to a higher level, Charles. I'm delighted. Good writing! Login to Reply Charles Messina Date: 11/30/2021 4:12:00 PM I was working on this for quite some time...I have to admit I had to open up the dictionary a few times...(lol) Thank you, Milt.

Lin Lane Date: 11/30/2021 8:02:00 AM Well now, Charlie, you're just being a show off by writing your Alliterisen poem with real Alliteration! lol Ambitious, and fantastic. Login to Reply Charles Messina Date: 11/30/2021 4:15:00 PM Well Hello, Lin. I love showing off (lol) It comes so rare. Great to see your avatar! Thank you so much for your lovely comments. Hugs Charlie

Jan Allison Date: 11/30/2021 7:00:00 AM Wow sensationally superb poetry:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Charles Messina Date: 11/30/2021 4:16:00 PM Thank you very much, Jan. :-) Hugs Charlie xx