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Summertime Fun - Not


Vacation time—escape from daily chores;
excitement beckons from the sunny beach!
Refreshing ocean pounding at its shores;
the realm of freedom well within my reach.

Yet, part of me is trapped behind in gloom
in thoughts about my lonely feline pets
now boarded in a strange, confining room;
their lack of freedom stirring deep regrets.

If only they could know that I’ll return
to let them roam again the home they know,
and give them once again the love they yearn—
my heart would be relieved from aching so.

But what goes on within each little mind
while I am free and leave them caged behind?


Sandra M. Haight

~Honorable Mention~  
Contest: Crazy Cat Lady
Sponsor: Line Gauthier
Judged:01/20/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Sinha-Roy Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 11:17 PM
Congratulations, Sandra on your placement with a such an enjoyable sonnet.
Gauthier Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 8:26 PM
Cute poem, Sandra. Thanks for entering my contest.
Dietrich Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 6:52 PM
Congrats for your win, Sandra. You created a touching sonnet with this one.
Allison Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 4:57 PM
I'm so glad to see this one on the winners list Sandra, it was lovely to read it again:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Lamoureux Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 9:30 AM
A sad one, congrats on your win.
A  Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 12:07 AM
Sandra, congratulations on your awesome summer time win. ~SKAT~
Haight Avatar
June 3, 2015 at 7:55 PM
Hi Skat, thank you once again for your visits and support. Sandra
La France Avatar
June 1, 2015 at 3:52 PM
Sandra, oh how sad for the felines but happy for your summertime fun and for you fine placement in the contest, I am lucky I have a friend who will come and take care of my kitties in my home and she does not charge me anything and thanks for visiting my poem, its summertime
Haight Avatar
June 1, 2015 at 7:06 PM
Hi Broken, thank you for your congrats! You are fortunate to have a friend to take care of your sweet kitties when you're away. Again, I appreciate your visit and nice comments. Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
June 1, 2015 at 1:29 PM
dropping back with my congrats Sandra:-)
Haight Avatar
June 1, 2015 at 7:01 PM
Hi Jan, thank you so much! Hugs, Sandra
Petersen Potter Avatar
May 31, 2015 at 3:25 PM
Excellent pen Sandra! I truly enjoyed your very nice sonnet.A 7! Wishing you a very lovely day! In his light!God bless you!:)D.
Haight Avatar
June 1, 2015 at 7:02 PM
So nice of you to stop by again, Dorian. I appreciate your nice comments and support! Bless you too, dear! Hugs, Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
May 30, 2015 at 1:38 AM
oh, I can relate to this one. When I have had occasion to visit a shelter, I just love seeing the beautiful cats there and I want so bad to take them all home with me. the poor dears. very nice sonnet.
Haight Avatar
June 1, 2015 at 7:04 PM
Yes, we have a shelter nearby too, and I know what you mean about wanting to take them home. Thank you for stopping by with your nice comment! Hugs, Sandra
Leiser Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 7:00 PM
Oh, this is so sweet and sad, Sandra. I also feel so guilty when we go on vacation and I have to leave our two dogs behind. Such a dilemma! Great poem :)
Haight Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 9:02 PM
Laura, I guess you can share in this feeling having been through it. Thanks for stopping by to read my poem and leaving your kind comments! Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 1:21 PM
I am sure many can relate to this heartfelt comment Sandra - so lovely to go on holiday but their is a price to pay when you have pets - love your take on the theme good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
Haight Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 3:26 PM
Thanks, Jan. We do not have pets at present, but I wrote this one summer back when we had our two beloved cats and vacationed at the Jersey Shore. They were so attached to me! Thanks for the positive comment. Hugs, Sandra
Rv Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 12:09 PM
How wonderful!! And sad too.. All the best in the contest!! :D :D I loed this!!
Haight Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 3:27 PM
Hi Sneha, thank you for your kind comment and best wishes. I really appreciate it! Hgus, Sandra
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