John Lawless Poet Free verse

Summertime

Summertime

August, Dog Days, natures speed bump
quieting the hum of impatience
laying humidity’s blanket
atop the weary landscape.

Leaves droop, listless vagrants
ambition wilting in the heat.
Flowers shield their eyes
begging for a merciful cloud.

Old Man River creeps
further from his banks,
withdrawing more each day.
Blue Heron watch.

Hot stones discourage basking turtles
mirages dance on asphalt lies
children shrink into the shadows
darkness beckoning night air.


7/2/2016

submitted to – SUMMERTIME – Poetry contest
sponsor – Janis Thompson.

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Connie Marcum Wong July 5, 2016 at 6:16 PM Now this is how I remember summer when I was young living in the raison capital of the world John. We always longed for autumn to arrive. Congratulations on your high placement! 7 ; ) John Lawless July 6, 2016 at 10:47 AM Connie, thanks for the kind words and high mark. Always nice to hear from you.

Alexis Y. July 5, 2016 at 2:54 PM Hi John, Congrats on your placement in the contest. It was well deserved: -) Alexis John Lawless July 6, 2016 at 10:46 AM Thanks Alexis

Janice Canerdy July 5, 2016 at 2:40 PM A 7 for this well-written WINNING poem that describes summer in Mississippi (my state), John. Vivid figures of speech! Janice John Lawless July 6, 2016 at 10:45 AM Thanks for the high mark Janice. As they say..."it ain't the heat - it's the humidity."

Janis Medders Tobechi July 5, 2016 at 1:26 PM Nice imagery, phrasing somewhat like haiku. Congratulations.... John Lawless July 6, 2016 at 10:44 AM thanks Janice, appreciate your stopping by to read and comment.

CayCay Godwin July 3, 2016 at 9:56 AM So, summer is or isn't your favorite season? Your creative write took my mind to 'heat', I guess my summer feel doesn't incorporate my heat feel! Your imagery is amazing and captivated me. Many are going to echo your sentiments if I've been a good comment noticer. Again, I love the creativity in this write ... CayCay John Lawless July 6, 2016 at 10:44 AM CayCay, growing up in the city close to Boston's Emerald Necklace afforded us city kids the opportunity to wander the woods with our dogs and discover nature on her terms.