Notes About The Poem

Summertime 1948 by Jackson Pollack

The perception is mine,
though you may get sucked in
here is where I begin 
a new expression
dropping sticks 
they drip paint onto the canvas 
in my own private Idaho 
droplets on massive scales
tossed into the abyss
thinner smells its space
Or in a self-contained gateway
when in a walled in feeling, hesitant,
driven by tortuous tones
dispatched onto fabric
soaked into frantic fibers
contrasted construct
 From need there are new ways,
when sober, quiet, less erratic
stable in a globular convex
 arbitrary?  Not at all,
drawn to the natural world
nature’s handyworks
 there is order
an emotional splashing 
where the eyes do not settle
 rhythm spackles not of chaos
but evoking nature scapes
an orchestral overture
no finales,
where the eyes do not settle

I’ve captured summertime
Fall aside, 
come one come all, 
dance 
  alongside
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Godwin Avatar
October 6, 2026 at 3:13 PM
I've always wanted inside the brain of someone who raved over his art, all I came up with was a quick, 'cool. I'll buy it' thing reaction. I just sat inside your perspective. Your mind sees/feeds layers of destinations that map into and through each other and must surely give a true art buzz. I know further know how different people are in our people sameness. Your poem provided a pivot in my perspective and understanding. Bet you didn't know all that was going to happen, me either. CayCay
Hind Avatar
October 6, 2026 at 12:22 PM
very intriguing, way way out of the box, like the painting-.... "Fall aside" !!!
Anaya Avatar
October 6, 2026 at 12:34 PM
They called him Jack the dripper<--that's out there, but seriously he was a national celebrity <3
Rodrigues Avatar
October 6, 2026 at 2:24 AM
rhythm spackles not of chaos but evoking nature scapes an orchestral overture no finale...a fun write! Enjoyed!
Anaya Avatar
October 6, 2026 at 12:28 PM
Thank you, Kimmy!
Smith  Avatar
October 5, 2026 at 9:27 PM
Your ekphrasis echoes the painting’s restless movement, while “where the eyes do not settle” beautifully captures its shifting visual rhythms. The interplay of paint, emotion, and natural imagery leads into a lovely closing invitation to dance alongside the artwork.
Anaya Avatar
October 6, 2026 at 12:32 PM
I try & capture the artist through personification, he was deeply invested in his privacy & didn't take well to celebrity (national celebrity). TyVm, poetess💕
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