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Poetry/Sonnet/Summertime
Copyright Protected, ID 07-1563-165-20
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written, July 20, 2023
For the International Premiere Contest, Summertime
Sponsor, Regina McIntosh, Judged 07/30/2023

Sixth Place

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I love my summer garden that brings peace, the beauty of the flowers is divine; hues mingle in purple, gold and cerise, and I adore the vines that curl and twine ! The trees leaves tremble in a gentle breeze, within their gnarled branches hidden birds sing; and what would summer be without the bees, I love the hummer's and each pretty wing ! Not far a stream is bubbling on its way, and a wildflower field is so serene; God created for me this perfect day, where I am bathed in beauty with each scene ! I go to the sun and the ocean crash; where the waves roar at me and on rocks smash !

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/31/2023 12:01:00 AM

Great work as usual. Congratulations!

Constance La France
Date: 7/31/2023 1:54:00 PM

Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings !

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/30/2023 1:56:00 AM

Just beautiful. I love this. Thank you so much for entering it. Congrats and God bless you sweet lady. Love, Gina

Constance La France
Date: 7/30/2023 4:08:00 PM

Gina, thank you so much for the contest and my placement, and the compliment and congrats, blessings and love !

Valsa George

Date: 7/26/2023 8:44:00 PM

What ebullience of life and beauty in your summer garden ! Love every line. All together your poem has given me an exquisite feel. All the Best dear Constance.

Constance La France
Date: 7/27/2023 2:03:00 PM

Valsa, thank you so much for the compliment and the lovely comment, appreciate !

DM Babbit

Date: 7/24/2023 9:47:00 AM

For all the gardens of the world, may its beauty spread. Loved your write.

Constance La France
Date: 7/27/2023 2:03:00 PM

DM, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, appreciate !

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/20/2023 1:11:00 PM

- I love my garden too ... but, the whole of July has been full of rain ... and the garden will soon be a swimming pool ... lovely described and lovely rhyme ... smashing :)

Constance La France
Date: 7/21/2023 7:43:00 AM

Anne-Lise, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, it is raining here at the moment, a break from the heart !

Tom Woody

Date: 7/20/2023 12:54:00 PM

Gotta love those rock smashing waves. Nice nature sonnet Constance

Constance La France
Date: 7/21/2023 7:43:00 AM

Tom, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, I just imagine them and close my eye and they are smashing !

Jay Narain

Date: 7/20/2023 11:40:00 AM

In my learning process on sonnets, you have written a perfect impreambic sonnet. Can you give me da-dum structure on this? Thanks,

Constance La France
Date: 7/20/2023 11:45:00 AM

Jay, thank you for the comment, my sonnet NO contains da-dum !