Poetry/Sonnet/Summertime Copyright Protected, ID 07-1563-165-20 All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France
Written, July 20, 2023 For the International Premiere Contest, Summertime Sponsor, Regina McIntosh, Judged 07/30/2023
Sixth Place
I love my summer garden that brings peace, the beauty of the flowers is divine; hues mingle in purple, gold and cerise, and I adore the vines that curl and twine ! The trees leaves tremble in a gentle breeze, within their gnarled branches hidden birds sing; and what would summer be without the bees, I love the hummer's and each pretty wing ! Not far a stream is bubbling on its way, and a wildflower field is so serene; God created for me this perfect day, where I am bathed in beauty with each scene ! I go to the sun and the ocean crash; where the waves roar at me and on rocks smash !
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