Summers Song Surrounded Us

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In summer’s sweetest time, There was no space at all for rhyme. Off to the fragrant forest we went. And erotic, moments, there we had spent. My head rested in joy upon your full lap. Exotic scent of pinewood’s sweet tree sap. You tickled me, so hard,with joy I cried. I’d relive each moment, if I only could. In your yellow truck, in those very thick woods. It held steaming passion’s secret, That not a soul knows……. Days of youth, forever are gone. You, and only you, are my eternal summer song! 7/20/2023

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David Fisher

Date: 7/23/2023 12:00:00 PM

Such a great story in rhyming form! So relatable in one form or another. Must be a sweet memory.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/23/2023 1:27:00 PM

Hi David..Hope you got my soup mail. He was such a charming dude! Mellow, wow! He had a laugh that rippled through the forest. I can still hear it))and a kind soul, that nourished me.and yes, that quality I wrote you about, Humility my.favorite! Truly a great memory.Pangie

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 7/21/2023 9:33:00 AM

Outstanding verse, Pangie. Fond memories in poetic form! BobH

Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/21/2023 10:22:00 AM

Robert.you, like the robber below me, both are people who I am in contact with since I first came here. They were both banned by men. almost. like family.))) I like the spot in the lot and I am glad I showed that picture because it’s very accurate.. I had forgotten all about John’s truck. He just love that thing. And a l what a soft and loving being he was. Gracias. Panagiota

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/21/2023 8:44:00 AM

A wonderfully romantic new creation my good friend. In youth love is new and also deepest when it is true. To have had such is a treasured blessing. A fav. God bless.

Robert Lindley
Date: 7/21/2023 11:09:00 AM

Thank you, my friend. I too am blessed by your friendship. God bless.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/21/2023 10:09:00 AM

I just reread it and I do like it.he was a fun man who smiled a lot, loved Texas and life. And he loved that truck and horses. I noticed a shift in these past two poems that I am pleased with. And I cannot put my finger on it..for sure, this is not my first no less romantic poem. But there’s something new about it.. …what is not new is your long lasting, friendship, that.I don’t take lightly! Or not for you I doubt I would have been here. Then he wouldn’t like that. But I’m not here to be a Miss America. I value the writings and integrity you bring to this site. Thank you, Robert. Panagiota

Lisa Ricci

Date: 7/21/2023 2:58:00 AM

Hello Miss Pangie. Good Morning. I very much enjoyed and admired your poetic expressions and imagery too. Yes, this entry is poetic. I love your title to which you never strayed. It was a pleasure turning to your page this morning. Blessings always (smile)

Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/21/2023 10:17:00 AM

Hello Lisa, how are you doing? Thank you for the thoughtful comment. I so appreciate comments like yours that sparkle with care and depth and are a hand up to keep writing, and read,..that was a good title as you said. I reveled in the humanity in your comment, Wishing you a day of creative joy. Panagiota.