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Summer's Sacrifice

 
winter mix 
 the snow, the sleet, the ice
three faces

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Jan Allison

Date: 8/19/2016 6:36:00 PM

Lovely haiku John:-) great to see you back on soup today:-) hugs Jan xx

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/6/2015 10:36:00 PM

I love this wintry mix with superb imagery, and excellent "aha moment" in the last line! BRAVO! Warmest regards. Pandita

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/6/2014 10:21:00 AM

dear john,been a while!... a haiku full of grace!.. how are you?... selah and huggs!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/2/2014 11:20:00 PM

Hi John, I was just surprised to find an email from you. Did you send it? I have been getting phony emails and I am afraid to follow the link that was sent unless it is truly from you. Let me know. Love, Joyce

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/3/2014 10:46:00 AM

Great work..I haven't seen you on here in so long..I have wondered what happened to you..Great work coming back..Sara

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 2/25/2014 8:25:00 PM

This will help me to stay in out of the cold but entice me to want to play in the snow John... Enjoyed... Verlena - Oblivion Dark Sunshine

Funom Makama

Date: 1/24/2014 4:14:00 PM

What a great poem. Its nice reading your piece once again. Keep on writing please.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/28/2013 7:07:00 AM

Hope you have the best New Year ever John. Light & Love

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2013 4:21:00 AM

John--Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer