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Summers of Gold

never will I forget summers of gold filigree memories shine like the sun Down the country lane on lazy summer days, my sisters and I walked. Rows and rows of tall green corn waved in the breeze on each side of us. Ripe raspberries were gifts of nature we collected alongside the lane with fingers smeared juicy red as well as our wide grins! Sometimes we veered off the dirt road to wander into large cleared fields where we ran with youth’s delight to cool ourselves in the pond hidden behind tall leafy trees gracing us with their shade. As sun set like a ruby in the sky, we raced home for Grandma's dinner. days of innocence blaze in my mind forever - more precious than gold the farm and its lane are gone but memories still glitter Bottom Form: Tanka Theme: Nature (but also life is sprinkled in) Oct. 19, 2021 For the "Let's Mix It Up" Poetry Contest of Constance La France

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Date: 12/10/2022 10:27:00 PM
Still a joy to read on my second time around. A lovely mix of nostalgia and pastoral imagery. Beautiful.
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Date: 11/5/2021 10:25:00 PM
A delight to read Andrea. Congratulations on your top win. I could imagine the scenes your words were so ebullient and charming. You share many such happy memories through your poetry. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 11/4/2021 2:20:00 PM
Andrea, awesome write, and congratulations on your win in my Let's Mix It Up Contest ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 11/1/2021 8:09:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, making me vicariously experience the Summer there. God bless you.
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Date: 10/30/2021 11:33:00 PM
So much of nature in it. Summer with its glamor is glittering. Beautiful lines. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/30/2021 9:29:00 AM
Your golden reminisce is breathtaking, Andrea. Your expressive pen brings me to the center of these summer moments with impressive nostalgia and wonderful emotions. Congratulations for your excellent win in Constance's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/30/2021 2:31:00 AM
Wonderful poetry Andrea, congratulations on your top spot win in Constance’s contest…Belle
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Date: 10/29/2021 11:21:00 PM
Delightful memory recap, so beautifully penned, congrats on your win, Andrea!
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Date: 10/29/2021 10:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful story/write. Love your line "but memories still glitter." Good memories are the best. Have a blessed autumn day.........
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Date: 10/29/2021 10:03:00 AM
A beautiful picture of childhood summers Andrea! My grandparents had a summer home in the country with a huge blackberry patch. Yummies! Your wonderful poem brought back so many wonderful memories. Thanks for the journey back into that delightful time! Congratulations!
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Date: 10/22/2021 12:35:00 AM
I would get scratched up but "Ripe raspberries were gifts of nature we collected alongside the lane" reminded me of how tasty the summer produce was and free for the finding. So thank you my Iowa-grown-friend.
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Date: 10/21/2021 10:01:00 PM
Hello Andrea ... fond memories described in your verse never leave you - thank you Andrea - Lindsay
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Date: 10/21/2021 3:29:00 PM
Wonderful portrayal of the pastoral and innocent memories you have of your grandparent's farm and the nostalgia of childhood that enriches your memory. Beautifully written, a joy to read.
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Date: 10/20/2021 8:05:00 AM
A joy to read Andrea, the earlier times of our lives how precious they were and live with us in our memories as you have shared so beautifully with us. We all have beautiful images we can escape to in our childhoods such as what you have shared with us but you have written yours so eloquently and have emotionally touched us with them. God bless you... Michael Rene.
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Date: 10/20/2021 2:50:00 AM
Such sweet memories of childhood... I can very well picturize as I read from top to bottom of this beautiful write Ria... I enjoyed reading and your poem flows well from one stanza to the next. Great descriptive imagery. Best wishes and hugs.. ~ Ani
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Date: 10/20/2021 2:08:00 AM
Memories abound. As I grow old I tend to forget the past. Hugs.
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Date: 10/19/2021 3:51:00 PM
Beautiful. I absolutely love this. Amazing write. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina
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Date: 10/19/2021 2:13:00 PM
How well you describe those wonderful summer days of youth growing up in the country. I believe we all find them even more enjoyable in our memories than while we actually lived them. Speaking at least for myself.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/19/2021 5:10:00 PM
i agree. Things tend to get more romantacized over time!
Date: 10/19/2021 11:17:00 AM
great imagism in the second stanza! Like the image - "filigree memories" - yes, the days of innocence. beautiful poem, Andrea - lingers in the mind. Love and best wishes~ Mala
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Date: 10/19/2021 8:14:00 AM
Great images Andrea. Days of innocence, always a joy to reminisce in.
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Date: 10/19/2021 8:13:00 AM
your pen spills golden ink with this descriptive gem Andrea:-) a joy to read:-) hugs jan xx
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