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Summer's Melting Point

Summer's mask behind glinting flowers—
'Fraid to be seen kneeling at their leaf;
In her passions swathed by the air—
With the blooming sweat to pull it off.

'Fraid to be seen kneeling at their leaf,
She endows her soul around stem's waist;
In her passions swathed by the air,
Like colors' shadows in probing moments.

She endows her soul around stem's waist;
In her passions swathed by the air,
Like colors' shadows in probing moments—
Summer's mask behind glinting flowers.

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Tom Woody

Date: 7/30/2024 4:46:00 PM

Very nice. I see you did without the rhymes. Let me see another...

Silent One

Date: 7/7/2024 2:45:00 AM

Did you see my Glenn Hughes pantoum? You did this one really well.. nice flow to it..

Paige Hind
Date: 7/7/2024 2:03:00 PM

Thanks! I just went to your page and read your pantoum- I really enjoyed it, one of the better ones I have read, :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/6/2024 6:26:00 PM

Wow. Great summer imagery

Peonieslore xo

Date: 7/6/2024 4:42:00 PM

lovely summer poem, perfectly capturing the recent blazing hell days of july. I've been disliking summer lately but your poem describes it so beautiful and left me in awe xx have a great day Paige!

Ink Empress

Date: 7/6/2024 11:15:00 AM

Dear paige your poems are always so deeply moving and thought provoking and this is another one that is woven in such a creative manner. I love especially “ Fraid to be seen kneeling at their leaf, She endows her soul around stem's waist; In her passions balanced in the air, Like colors' shadows in scouring moments.” soul stirring! So much depth in your imagery.. Pleasure reading you alwys. Sending you light