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Summer's Love Call

Birth of a bird's song,
Symphony of a new day;
A Summer's love call.

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Raul Moreno

Date: 10/6/2009 12:39:00 PM

Nice haiku, love the last line, best of luck with this one...Raul

Robin L. Gass

Date: 9/30/2009 5:45:00 AM

Congratulations, Abe! The images are beautiful in this lovely and perfect Haiku! Good luck in the finals! Love, Robin

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 9/24/2009 7:06:00 PM

Congratulations on your making the first rounds in the finals! Laura :)

James Fraser

Date: 9/24/2009 12:15:00 PM

Abe, congratulations in getting past round one of the competition, good luck mate >> James

Milton Toran

Date: 9/5/2009 10:18:00 AM

Now that's what I call a "knock 'em dead" haiku! Perfect 5-7-5 syllable count. The wording is absolutely splendid! I love haiku and this one is a masterpiece! Thank you for sharing your brilliance as well as your masterful skill. Congratulations on a well deserved feature! Milt

James Fraser

Date: 9/5/2009 7:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Abe>>James

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 9/1/2009 9:37:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku. Too bad summer is almost gone :( Love, Iolanda

Mark Pringle

Date: 9/1/2009 12:35:00 PM

Nie poem

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 9/1/2009 4:31:00 AM

wonderful haiku, tremendous expression of words, Congratulations: Regards: Déirdre Ó Maidín

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 9/1/2009 4:06:00 AM

Congratulations, Abe, on having your well-written Summer's love poem featured this week. Your words joyfully entice the mind. Keep writing. Lovingly, DAS-J

Anthony Nutter

Date: 9/1/2009 3:02:00 AM

Congratulations on being featured this week. A. W.

Raul Moreno

Date: 8/31/2009 11:54:00 PM

Abe, congrats on your feature this week...Raul

Date: 8/31/2009 4:16:00 PM

What an uplifting view! Nice use of imagery. Enjoyed your poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep on writing! Wishing you continued success. Karen

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 8/31/2009 7:23:00 AM

This is a well deserved feature … what a creative, wonderful poem, worth featuring..; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful pieces. You are great Abe! Adeleke