Summer's Love Call

Birth of a bird's song,
Symphony of a new day;
A Summer's love call.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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October 6, 2009 at 12:39 PM
Nice haiku, love the last line, best of luck with this one...Raul
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September 30, 2009 at 5:45 AM
Congratulations, Abe! The images are beautiful in this lovely and perfect Haiku! Good luck in the finals! Love, Robin
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September 24, 2009 at 7:06 PM
Congratulations on your making the first rounds in the finals! Laura :)
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September 24, 2009 at 12:15 PM
Abe, congratulations in getting past round one of the competition, good luck mate >> James
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September 5, 2009 at 10:18 AM
Now that's what I call a "knock 'em dead" haiku! Perfect 5-7-5 syllable count. The wording is absolutely splendid! I love haiku and this one is a masterpiece! Thank you for sharing your brilliance as well as your masterful skill. Congratulations on a well deserved feature! Milt
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September 5, 2009 at 7:47 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Abe>>James
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September 1, 2009 at 9:37 PM
Beautiful Haiku. Too bad summer is almost gone :( Love, Iolanda
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September 1, 2009 at 12:35 PM
Nie poem
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September 1, 2009 at 4:31 AM
wonderful haiku, tremendous expression of words, Congratulations: Regards: Déirdre Ó Maidín
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September 1, 2009 at 4:06 AM
Congratulations, Abe, on having your well-written Summer's love poem featured this week. Your words joyfully entice the mind. Keep writing. Lovingly, DAS-J
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September 1, 2009 at 3:02 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week. A. W.
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August 31, 2009 at 11:54 PM
Abe, congrats on your feature this week...Raul
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August 31, 2009 at 4:16 PM
What an uplifting view! Nice use of imagery. Enjoyed your poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep on writing! Wishing you continued success. Karen
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August 31, 2009 at 7:23 AM
This is a well deserved feature … what a creative, wonderful poem, worth featuring..; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful pieces. You are great Abe! Adeleke
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August 31, 2009 at 4:03 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Abe. Hope to see many more of yours featured. Love, Carol
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August 31, 2009 at 12:08 AM
Congrats on your featured poem this week Abe.Rgds Brian
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August 30, 2009 at 6:54 PM
So lovely, and well deserving to be featured this week!! Congratulations Abe on this perfect little haiku!! ~ love, Carrie
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February 20, 2009 at 4:06 PM
Abe, I hope that we all start hearing the bird's song. Here in North Florida it's still too cold! Lovely image in this poem, Carolyn
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February 10, 2009 at 8:26 PM
I love hearing a bird's song...Another great Haiku
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February 3, 2009 at 9:55 AM
Such a beautiful haiku. Longing to hear them. Love, Shar
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February 3, 2009 at 3:08 AM
A call we are all waiting for. Tyler
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February 2, 2009 at 5:23 PM
This is perfect, Abe. I love to hear the birds first morning call. Lovely haiku! Love, robin
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