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Summer's Invocation

      Sunset's Invocation At day's end, with the fan struggling to turn. The sky, all corals and blues, so tired of the sun's incredible burn. The mystic message I always see, Is that I am a part of the land and the deep sea. In the distance the seagulls speak to me. "Fear not, poetess, the best is yet to be. Life is but a limited edition. Before you, is an eternal life" was their admonition. So, as I see the session of night come waltzing in, I decide to be part of this earthly spin. Night bound, writing, serene I lay..... What a blessed way to end a great sapphire day!                        August 18, 2020             8:45pm PST

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Date: 8/17/2020 2:20:00 PM
Pretty imagery invokes a beautiful day!
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/17/2020 2:31:00 PM
You are so roght Pangie xx
Date: 8/17/2020 11:56:00 AM
Hello Panagiota wow! So beautiful. Is all I can say, Hugs Darlene xxx-oooo.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/18/2020 12:09:00 PM
Hello Panagiota,this is why Mike fav. this poem. Thank you Panagiota .Hugs Darlene xxxx-oooo.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/17/2020 12:13:00 PM
Hi Darlene..lunch is so great today. I just saw this response. Beautiful is a perfect response. I think!)) I can see why Mike FAVed it. You are a terrific friend. I love to see you write and back so many poets here! You are amazing! Pangie xx
Date: 8/17/2020 8:21:00 AM
Hi Pangie, another wonderful write from your golden pen, the beauty of your feelings and the sunset flows down the page. I love the content, it brings me peace as I read down the lines. Has to be a fav. Have a wonderful monday. Blessings and Hugs....Mike.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/17/2020 8:50:00 AM
Dear Mike, I am ever grateful to you for seeing the beauty in this poem. I honestly think it's one of my BEST. I read it several times. Still, think so. It takes a poet like you to catch the nuances.i don't pen "hit and run"Poetry often...and embrassed when I go for the fast over the meaningful. Even if the best gets least comments. I know in my heart, I have not sold out to who I am. Thank you for your vision. Pangiexx
Date: 8/17/2020 2:49:00 AM
Glad your temps are starting to dip 40 c. Is my limit. Tom
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/17/2020 7:06:00 AM
Not really. Temp here is 111 today. All week in the 100's Yikes Pangiexx

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