Summer's Grief

An Autumn sunrise lights a maple tree
October’s hues are edged with olive green
The vibrant background cheers the season’s glee	
The mountain ridges back the misty scene

Big bears are searching after mountain caves 
While mallards fly before the snow begins
The ridges form astounding leafy waves 
Where folks are cutting fully-grown pumpkins

The red hawk soars beyond the dew drenched morn 
hence he denies to perch and lifts above 
his flight creates designs the skies adorn 
and dogs pursue raccoons around foxglove. 

A lively squirrel scampers to and fro 
Gray rabbits bounce amid the splendid leaves 
And sparkling streams outrace the brownish doe 
With the adieu of summer as she grieves. 


Iambic Pentameter
August 8th, 2014
©2014 by Regina Riddle
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Trichet Avatar
September 17, 2014 at 8:40 PM
Lovely imagery Regina. Congratulations
Allison Avatar
September 17, 2014 at 5:27 PM
you painted a glorious picture here:-) many congrats hugs jan xxx
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 17, 2014 at 7:34 AM
Congratulations on your lovely winning poem Regina.
Andresen Avatar
September 17, 2014 at 4:34 AM
- Sigh .... yes, goodbye beautiful summer - Lovely poem Regina ! - Congrats on your 4th place - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mehta Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 9:44 PM
Lovely write on nature, congrats on the win, Regina
Deschler Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 8:54 PM
Your words have painted some very nice pictures of wildlife and nature. This was a very enjoyable poem to read. Great work, Regina! Congrats on your win!
A. Sharma Avatar
September 2, 2014 at 8:26 AM
Wonderful write Regina! Congrats on ur awesome win dear!
Jerden Avatar
September 1, 2014 at 8:29 AM
Congratulations, Regina!
Mehta Avatar
September 1, 2014 at 5:19 AM
Wild life well displayed, congrats. Regina
Johnson Avatar
September 1, 2014 at 1:44 AM
Nicely done, Regina. Congratulations on your win.
Meier-Hans Avatar
August 31, 2014 at 8:40 PM
Congratulations Regina. A lovely poem that made me feel like I was outside watching all this. Well done.
Bordner Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 8:47 PM
Oooo...I like that sharp emotional ending Regina. I've been blessed to live happily in the Midwest, and I've always been inspired by the summer autumn transition, and of the remarkable strength and personality of the wildlife. You portray them all with such vivid identity. I'm so excited that Autumn, the Queen of Seansons is near! This great write makes me giddy, I'm FAVING it! J.A.B.
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August 8, 2014 at 9:02 PM
Thank you o much. Autumn is definitely my favorite season. I love it. And I'm delighted you liked it. God bless you.
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