Summer's End

summer.
in your shyness 
this year.
you barely peeked out your door.
the days where so cool at times.

my thermostat,
 insisted,
i switched it to heat.

my air conditioner 
was in therapy.
mostly ignored
it had lost its self esteem.

still i was always faithful.
hand in hand 
we took walks together,
 my friend.
walks i cherished.

as you ready to migrate 
perhaps to florida
you know you will be missed.
if nothing else
for the long days you put in 
and how you never complained.

autumn you know is already here.
it is great
to spend time 
with you both.

she is magnificent this year.
forever youthful
in her quilted shawl of startling mixtures.

crayon shades of auburn, sunny oranges
special new yellows, reds and purples.

let's celebrate with bonfires,
huge marshmallows,
single spiked.
shish kebobs on branches lent.

the children will be crazed 
playing in piles of  pillowed leaves.

oh my oh my. the parties autumn will throw
what would childhood be
without summer,
autumn,
and your siblings?

come those indian days 
don't forget summer 
don't forget you'll visit.

oh the stories and laughs we'll share.
how seduced we are every year.

with summer at an end
with autumn just at hand
then summer again
and back to autumn
as if we were on a carousel.

September 8 2014
Summer's End Contest
Kelly

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 9/17/2014 8:42:00 PM
Great fun write Maurice congrats to you
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Date: 9/17/2014 5:19:00 PM
oh I missed this delightful poem Maurice many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/17/2014 8:04:00 AM
It sure was a meager summer here in Canada Aye Maurice. I want to take off south with our geese but am grounded for now. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/17/2014 5:25:00 AM
We have a scorching heat in India, it's great relief as the summer ends, Maurice. congrats
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Date: 9/17/2014 3:54:00 AM
- A great poem, saying goodbye to summer Maurice - Congrats with your win! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/16/2014 9:33:00 PM
I live in Wisconsin, and it didn't feel like summer very much at all this year, so I can relate to this poem.... I really like the nostalgic feel of this write. Nice work, Maurice! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 9/10/2014 2:18:00 PM
Autumn is so beautiful, still I dread it because winter follows. Anymore, winter is just ice, ice and more ice. I will be riding around this autumn, taking beautiful pictures, as I always love to do and getting inspired to write more. A wonderful picture, you have painted.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/11/2014 7:10:00 PM
again thank you so much for your kind words'
Date: 9/9/2014 2:52:00 PM
By the way I don't like this carousel, it gets me kind of nerves to know, it swaps when, ever it wants. :) Although, I'm looking forward in a few Autumn parties. I'm just glad she is here. Enjoying...LINDA
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/9/2014 3:32:00 PM
Ditto!!!!
Date: 9/9/2014 2:47:00 PM
Look, Robin, I got 4 words for ya.... TAG YOU ARE IT.............;)
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Date: 9/9/2014 2:52:00 PM
typo.. four
Date: 9/9/2014 6:02:00 AM
Mon ami Maurice, you made me homesick, how? I hope you know I am a Canadian national too! I was in Montreal for twenty years where I studied and taught. Your poem marvelous, the scenes incomparable, the expressions inspiring! Wish you good luck, from my part a seven!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/9/2014 6:10:00 AM
You are too kind my friend. thank you i enjoy our building friendship.
Date: 9/8/2014 3:45:00 PM
I LOVE THIS... It's amazing, awesome and special... genuine, unique, more adjectives than I can think of in all my wordery. I love it. Thank you and All my best for the contest. With love and prayers, Gina
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/8/2014 8:08:00 PM
GINA, thank you, thank you, thank you.
Date: 9/8/2014 8:26:00 AM
Oh how I look forward to Autumn even more now that I have read your poem. Crisp nights by the fire all curled up in a blanket. Rustling through the pillow of leaves at my feet. My favorite season of the year. Glorious poem. :-) Christine
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/8/2014 8:10:00 PM
a kind comment from a kind person. I love that you read my work. Thank you.
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Date: 9/8/2014 8:09:00 PM
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