Barbara Gorelick Poet Tanka

Summer's End

The earth looks tired
Harvest home, the silos full
Dust swirls in the breeze
Birds inspect the dry rubble
Hills long burnt by the sun, wait



Barbara Gorelick 7/11/11

Brown..for Nette's color contest

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Carol Eastman July 18, 2011 at 8:02 AM You seem to always depict wonderfully descriptive visuals in so few words. To do so my poems become long winded stories... You are very talented.

Jack Horne July 16, 2011 at 1:56 PM Many congrats on your wins, Barbara : )

Andrea Dietrich July 14, 2011 at 8:08 PM wow, what a great way to do brown, Barbara. I had forgotten this color was in the contest and was trying to figure out what it was, but this poem surely depicts it! Congratulations on your beautiful tanka's win.

Debbie Guzzi July 14, 2011 at 2:01 PM I did have a brown phase....I think I was brown paired with orange in my late teens early 20's and it does look great with a tan! Congrad's Light & Love

Dr.Ram Mehta July 14, 2011 at 7:32 AM My congratulations on this win in the contest of nette,Barbara

Michael J. Falotico July 14, 2011 at 6:12 AM An excellent piece and win my poet friend...love Michael

Carol Sunshine Brown July 14, 2011 at 5:51 AM Congratulations for your win Barbara in Nette's "Color My World" Contest. Love, Carol

Elaine George July 13, 2011 at 10:11 PM Sensational Tanka, Barbara. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie

Juanita Warden July 13, 2011 at 8:37 PM Great Tanka..Congrats on your win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 13, 2011 at 3:50 PM Congrats BG on a fantastic win in color my world with this excellent expression on brown luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 11, 2011 at 8:31 PM lovely lilting lines of beauty BG .. good luck in the contest .. a sure fire winner luv..