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Summer's End

The earth looks tired
Harvest home, the silos full
Dust swirls in the breeze
Birds inspect the dry rubble
Hills long burnt by the sun, wait



Barbara Gorelick 7/11/11

Brown..for Nette's color contest

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Carol Eastman Date: 7/18/2011 8:02:00 AM You seem to always depict wonderfully descriptive visuals in so few words. To do so my poems become long winded stories... You are very talented. Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 7/16/2011 1:56:00 PM Many congrats on your wins, Barbara : ) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/14/2011 8:08:00 PM wow, what a great way to do brown, Barbara. I had forgotten this color was in the contest and was trying to figure out what it was, but this poem surely depicts it! Congratulations on your beautiful tanka's win. Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 7/14/2011 2:01:00 PM I did have a brown phase....I think I was brown paired with orange in my late teens early 20's and it does look great with a tan! Congrad's Light & Love Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 7/14/2011 7:32:00 AM My congratulations on this win in the contest of nette,Barbara Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 7/14/2011 6:12:00 AM An excellent piece and win my poet friend...love Michael Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 7/14/2011 5:51:00 AM Congratulations for your win Barbara in Nette's "Color My World" Contest. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Elaine George Date: 7/13/2011 10:11:00 PM Sensational Tanka, Barbara. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie Login to Reply

Juanita Warden Date: 7/13/2011 8:37:00 PM Great Tanka..Congrats on your win. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 7/13/2011 3:50:00 PM Congrats BG on a fantastic win in color my world with this excellent expression on brown luv.. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 7/11/2011 8:31:00 PM lovely lilting lines of beauty BG .. good luck in the contest .. a sure fire winner luv.. Login to Reply