Summer's End

Waving fields of grain Await the harvesters scythe Heralds summer’s end

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/6/2012 8:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week Margaret. Love, Carol

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/2/2012 10:37:00 PM

This poem is featured this week. I'm happy for you. It's a good haiku.

Date: 1/17/2010 5:31:00 PM

Nice use of imagery and personification for an interesting view. Thank you for sharing it and for your kind comment. Karen

Ava Douglass

Date: 1/17/2010 3:20:00 AM

this is cool i like it (:

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/16/2010 2:29:00 PM

Just how a haiku should be done. You are using the form the way it was intended (at least from how I have learned they should actually be written) Very nice, Margaret, and thanks for your kind comments today. LUv, andrea