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April came and the rains did fall, May and June came with flowers for all. Summer brought the heat of season, and people sat in the living room air-condition. Fall brought colors bright and bold, Halloween haunted spirits nights cold. And as the last leaf fell off the now naked tree, Winter came and slapped a freezing spree. In the lively hood of the dancing spring, bustling actives merriness brings. “Beyond the silence of summers end,” the roll of the school bus wheels begin. The school bus wheels rolling is great for me, being a monitor provides my paycheck you see. So “beyond the silence of summers end,” the ride onto educational pursuit grins.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 8/8/2023 12:23:00 PM
Lovely piece Miranda, with nice rhyme and flow too, also really enjoying your writing. Blessings,Gordon
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Date: 7/16/2023 9:59:00 PM
Beautifully written highlighting the loveliness of all seasons. Enjoyed this colorful poem. Congratulations Miranda on your win.
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 7/17/2023 7:18:00 AM
Thank you for that.
Date: 7/16/2023 8:44:00 AM
Hi Miranda,my favorite seasons are spring and autumn,winter can be to cold summer to hot,enjoyed your poem.
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 7/16/2023 8:47:00 AM
My favorite season is summer, because July 4th and my birthday, July 2. And yes, I am very patriotic.
Date: 7/12/2023 3:17:00 AM
Very nicely penned Miranda, Congrats on your win
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 7/16/2023 8:45:00 AM
Thank you for this.
Date: 7/9/2023 3:36:00 PM
this is so charming. Love it, Miranda.
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 7/9/2023 4:41:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 7/8/2023 4:39:00 PM
Happy trails, Miranda. I enjoy the trip through the season of life. Well written and rhymed my friend. Have a great weekend! Bill
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 7/8/2023 5:38:00 PM
Glad you liked this. Happy trails to you too.
Date: 7/7/2023 8:36:00 PM
You went through the seasons with great dexterity. Each is essential for nature to grow. A splendid poem.
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 7/7/2023 8:55:00 PM
Thank you for the comment on my dexterity!

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