Summer's End

Silence falls around me
Night has settled in
Darkness takes the sunlight
Wraps its beam within


Daytime waits 'til morning
Clouds rest in the sky
Moon has risen over
Wind does hurry by

Summer is near ending
Autumn drawing fast
Memories created
Hope that they will last...

But the magic interlude
That keeps the heat enclosed
Seeps away in solitude
As if it ne'er had posed

 

This is a re-post
©Copyright Donna Golden    

July 20, 1999

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 9/22/2009 12:32:00 PM
I meant to say heat-chill. Love again, daver
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Date: 9/22/2009 12:30:00 PM
Love it, Donna. Gives a sort of hear-chill to think of the coming fall. Love, daver
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Date: 1/31/2009 6:40:00 AM
A lovely poem, and I agree it is nice to feel the summer's end so warm and gentle, in the midst of our freezing weather. Love, Shar
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Date: 1/30/2009 8:44:00 PM
This is a very beautiful write. The second verse is wonderful..a lot of magic in those words..Great write. Chris.
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Date: 1/30/2009 7:24:00 PM
Delicate phrasing and lovely imagery... Well done Donna! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 1/30/2009 7:18:00 PM
Dear Donna It is nice to be reminded of summer during this cold New York winter. I enjoyed this quatrain. Have you read Omar Khayms Rubiyat? It is one of the most famous books of quatrains. I have read quite a bit about it. Hope you keep up the good poetry and thanks for your comments. And yes, I am familiar with that children's rhyme. Sincerely Matthew Anish
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Date: 1/30/2009 5:38:00 PM
Nice one Donna....can't wait for summer nights. Reminds me that summer will come again!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 1/30/2009 5:31:00 PM
Good flow and rythme! Laura :)
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Date: 1/30/2009 3:45:00 PM
Nice work and great use of imagery Donna...Raul
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Date: 1/30/2009 3:35:00 PM
Such a brilliant write, really draws the reader in. Now we need one for winters end, I am so ready, Blessings Ron
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Date: 1/30/2009 2:40:00 PM
Superb rhyming here and lovely sentiment. Rich and warm poetry. Regards Dérdre
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