Summer's Breeze

I feel you
in a winded breath
like a tongued whisper
against bare flesh




From my poem Seduced~
June 22, 2019
"ARBITRIUM DIVISA 2 Poetry Contest"
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Alexander Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 10:34 PM
Excellent write. I enjoyed it. Thank you~
Adams Avatar
November 21, 2019 at 11:59 AM
thank you so much for stopping by and your wonderful comment :)
Gondolf Avatar
July 17, 2019 at 10:04 AM
Sandy, back to say congrats on your win for this breathtaking piece. John
Adams Avatar
July 18, 2019 at 7:54 AM
Thank you John.... hugs :)
Hamilton Avatar
July 17, 2019 at 9:40 AM
This is an amazing snippet, congrats on a fine win!
Adams Avatar
July 18, 2019 at 7:54 AM
Thank you John :) hugs
Gondolf Avatar
June 23, 2019 at 11:45 AM
Sandy, after reading this I was compelled to go back and read "Seduced"...quite breathtaking and sensual. I loved them both. Best of luck in the contest. John
Adams Avatar
June 23, 2019 at 11:56 AM
Thank you John... Seduced is one of my personal favorites... :)
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