Summers Autumn

The last of summer’s scorching days wilt by
Watching bush fires mushroom languidly into jet streams
Whilst the vast coastal plain laments at apathetic clouds
Trees hang limply on lifeless limbs
Forcing leaves in search of their shade
 
Beaches scorch under sunburnt bodies
Through a quivering veil of vicious haze
That longs for a breeze to steal the greedy sweat
Dripping from finger to toe
 
A cool relief arrives, as kites take children to the skies
Heralding the imperceptible change
To a coast that’s had its roast
As autumn blankets the last summer weeks
Like a ghost lost in a fog
 
The seasons are passing each other by
As morning lawns reveal footprints through the night’s silky dew
As sheets are swapped for duvet’s
And hearth’s wail in search of warmth
 
Cool night air thieves under doors
Dogs and cats curl tighter in a ball
Suburbs bristle and await
A sun, that now sleeps through
 
Trees stand frightened as their leaves make a choice
Emeralds over gold or yellows to favour red as
Auburn litter eddies in awkward swirls
Above their frosty roots
 
Autumn now shows herself in all her grandeur
A frigid concert of muted colours
And musty soil beneath shortened days
Bracing for winter’s wrath in all her mighty fury
 
 
31 August 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 9/17/2014 7:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem Mark.
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Date: 9/17/2014 5:24:00 AM
Congrats on the win, Mark
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Mark Trichet
Date: 9/17/2014 7:30:00 AM
Cheers Dr Ram, I had fun writing this one
Date: 9/17/2014 3:59:00 AM
- A poem which I liked very much, Mark ! - Congrats on your win! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Mark Trichet
Date: 9/17/2014 7:30:00 AM
Thanx Anne Lise, Im glad you enjoyed it. Im enjoying reading through winners - such beautiful writes. Will stop by shortly...
Date: 9/16/2014 9:27:00 PM
I enjoyed these rich and vivid descriptions of how we must also change with the seasons.... A very nice poem, Mark! Congrats on your win!
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Mark Trichet
Date: 9/17/2014 7:28:00 AM
Wonderful contest Kelly, glad to be amongst such beautiful writers
Date: 9/4/2014 9:17:00 AM
you are a wonderful writer. I really enjoyed reading this gem. thank you.
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Mark Trichet
Date: 9/17/2014 7:27:00 AM
Appreciate the visit Maurice, it means alot
Date: 9/1/2014 12:13:00 PM
Oh I like that line, -a frigid concert of muted colors- beautiful imagery throughout your poem, ;)
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Mark Trichet
Date: 9/17/2014 7:25:00 AM
Cheers Casarah
Date: 8/31/2014 6:35:00 AM
This should do very well in the contest. I loved the bit about the children and their kites and the animals curling up to get warmth. Also...the coast having had its roast was a nice touch. Great imagery and interesting play on words.
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Mark Trichet
Date: 8/31/2014 5:05:00 PM
Thanks Eileen for the visit and kind words
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