Summer Winds

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Placed Third in: Summer Funny Limerick Poetry Contest of Tannia Kitchin

Summer Winds Amidst strong winds, John was treading the road Carrying on his back a heavy load, It was a pitiful sight To brave the wind in such plight: When load fell down, it showed a bag of toads!

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/14/2025 9:36:00 AM

Congratulations poet friend Krish! :)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/13/2025 2:48:00 PM

Krish, congratulations on your winning placement with your fun limerick.

Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 7/14/2025 7:35:00 AM

Thank you poet friend for appreciating the above limerick, for its placement in the contest sponsored by you and your kind wishes. Wishing you a cheerful new week.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2025 9:15:00 PM

Oh those loads of toads. Nicely done, Krish.

Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 7/5/2025 7:24:00 AM

Thank you dear poetess for appreciating the above write. Wish you a weekend filled with light.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 7/3/2025 2:46:00 PM

The toads were happy that the load fell down - It gave them freedom to roam round the town - The folk were aghast - The toads had a blast - And left the town’s ground a yellowish brown…… Beryl

Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 7/5/2025 7:34:00 AM

A nice limerick my friend as continuation of the preceding one. Unfortunately the contest had set rules of its own. Wishing you a delightful weekend.