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Summer Vacation

Taking my long vacation, Great people as my companion, Cool music as we go along, Sunny day as the weather condition. Looking at the view outside, Mountains from a distance, Green trees from side to side, Birds flying happily, what a glance! Away from the city for days, “You need to take a nice rest”, “Just Relax” my mind says, This is my fervent wish. Strolling on the flowery and forested place, Light peeks everywhere are the sun rays, Narrow pathways look like a maze, Colorful flowers scattered on summer days As we approach the sandy beach, Feasting my eyes on the waves, Can feel the cool summer breeze, Kissing the entrance of the caves. March 8, 2013

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Date: 7/25/2013 9:59:00 PM
hello, Maria the poem is hot and Awesome... congrats with your summer time poem...love Linda
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Date: 7/25/2013 1:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Maria xx
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Date: 7/24/2013 7:23:00 PM
congrats on your win Maria
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Date: 7/24/2013 1:35:00 PM
Maria, , a lovely gift of a poem. Thank you for the support my contest. Stop by and enjoy my blog: (A Lavender Day-- summer contest) winners. Have yourself an awesome day. LUV ~SKAT
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Date: 3/11/2013 2:47:00 PM
sounds like a wonderful holiday, Maria - congrats on your wins too, my friend
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Date: 3/10/2013 1:56:00 PM
Beautiful, Maria. Made me want to have a good vacation - just to get see new things :). Enjoyed!
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Date: 3/10/2013 9:28:00 AM
You indeed had a very wonderful vacation my dearest friend! Reading your excellent quatern tonight makes me long for even a short vacation. As of now still so so busy. I am just trying to have few time here at soup. I am on my way to bed now coz I need to wake up for another day of work tom. Good luck and best wishes always! Thank you so much for the wonderful comments and congratulatory greetings too. God bless and good night! love always, Leonora
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Date: 3/9/2013 11:11:00 AM
- It's really good with a vacation, do completely different things than what one does every day. - Enjoy every day.....and every minute Maria! - Love your poem! - Happy holidays! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/8/2013 6:45:00 AM
Excellent!!!! Hey you should check out a young poet name Margherita Russo
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Date: 3/7/2013 3:06:00 PM
a very nice and relaxing poem. It makes me wish I were on that stroll!
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Date: 3/7/2013 2:16:00 PM
Maria nicely written. I love the imagery you penned in words. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 3/7/2013 12:42:00 PM
Maria you make this very summery and light,well done...David
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