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Summer Tunes - Visual 4

The melody of summer grips The soothing sounds vibrate the soul Its rhythm tingles to the tips The melody of summer grips Bringing a smile to once sad lips It frees the mind and makes you whole The melody of summer grips The soothing sounds vibrate the soul

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Harry Horsman

Date: 4/23/2018 10:40:00 AM

Taking in your first posting on soup. I'm so glad i did,,wonderful read..

Laura Hay
Date: 4/25/2018 7:11:00 AM

Wow, thanks for taking the time to drop by and for the compliment too Harry, warm regards, Laura.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/22/2015 10:35:00 PM

Hey, I see this one got featured here at Soup. BIG congrats for that!!

Laura Hay
Date: 8/8/2016 2:58:00 PM

Thanks for your kind comments Andrea :)

Lycia Harding

Date: 6/27/2015 6:46:00 AM

Nice write, Laura. Gotta love a triolet!

Laura Hay
Date: 6/27/2015 8:59:00 AM

Thank you very much Lycia! Kind Rgds, Laura

Skat A

Date: 6/27/2015 2:06:00 AM

Laura, Congratulations on having your poem featured this past week. SKAT love

Laura Hay
Date: 6/27/2015 2:31:00 AM

Thank you Skat, kind Rgds, Laura

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/15/2015 9:46:00 AM

Laura, congrats on your win with your melodic triolet! Love, Kim

Laura Hay
Date: 6/15/2015 10:24:00 AM

Thank you very much Kim :-)

Skat A

Date: 6/13/2015 6:31:00 PM

LAURA, Congratulations on your LOVELY SUMMER TRIOLET ----- SKAT :-)

Laura Hay
Date: 6/15/2015 10:24:00 AM

Thank you very much SKAT :-)

Paul Callus

Date: 6/13/2015 3:37:00 PM

Congratulations Laura!! So pleased to see this lovely poem on the winners' list, and even better than mine:)) Well done! // paul

Laura Hay
Date: 6/13/2015 4:59:00 PM

Really pleased and amazed I got on the list too. I need learn more about meter so need to read and practice more with that as a challenge to myself. Wouldn't have made it on the list without your advice. Warm rgds Laura

Jan Allison

Date: 6/13/2015 5:46:00 AM

a lovely summer triolet - congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Laura Hay
Date: 6/13/2015 4:56:00 PM

Thank you very much Jan! Kind rgds, Laura

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2015 1:10:00 AM

Nicely done, a melody for summer! The meter was not consistently iambic; otherwise, this would have scored higher. Congrats in my contest.

Laura Hay
Date: 6/13/2015 4:55:00 PM

Many thanks Andrea, I need to practice this style , this was my first triolet so thoroughly please with the result! Kind rgds Laura

Paul Callus

Date: 6/12/2015 10:18:00 AM

Well done Laura! You catch on quickly:) This is a lovely triolet. Your summer melody is a treat for heart and soul. All the best. // paul

Laura Hay
Date: 6/12/2015 3:52:00 PM

thanks again Paul - you've been very inspiring and I will be reading more of your fab work too, kind rgds, Laura.

Laura Hay

Date: 6/8/2015 8:04:00 AM

This poem doesnt quite follow the correct Triolet format - i will attempt a new one with the correct format - thank you for reading my poetry.

Laura Hay
Date: 6/9/2015 5:59:00 AM

Corrected format now applied to this without too much change required. And thanks to Paul for his support.

Richard Jordan

Date: 5/29/2015 9:55:00 AM

It is so hard to write a triolet without the repetition becoming boring, but here it works. After reading this, I'm encouraged to give the form a try! Thanks, and I'll watch for more poems.

Laura Hay
Date: 5/30/2015 1:54:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words this is the first time I have attempted this type of poetry. I too will look out for yours kind Rgs Laura

Viv Wigley

Date: 5/29/2015 1:12:00 AM

What a wonderful first submission, Laura. Welcome to Poetry soup. Enjoy your stay. Viv x

Laura Hay
Date: 5/29/2015 6:10:00 AM

Thank you very much Viv, its great to receive such nice comments! Laura

Skat A

Date: 5/27/2015 6:38:00 PM

before I forget Laura, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Laura Hay
Date: 5/28/2015 5:43:00 AM

Very nice of you to say. Once I familiarise myself with the site I will drop you a note, kind regards :-)

Skat A

Date: 5/27/2015 6:06:00 PM

Laura, i love the sound of summer... can't wait... HUGS SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/27/2015 5:03:00 PM

Laura, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Laura Hay
Date: 5/28/2015 5:41:00 AM

Many thanks for the warm welcome Linda! :-)