summer time

sunflower faces clocks heavy with time and seed... sun-seconds passing

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/20/2025 5:39:00 AM

Glad to see you at the tippy-top! Worthy first place! Congrats, Charlotte!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/20/2025 2:18:00 AM

- Congratulations on your top win :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs

Arlo Parker

Date: 6/19/2025 10:57:00 PM

Yes, you've bent this Form to your will. Delightful and a depth charge, Pearl.

Jaymee Thomas

Date: 6/19/2025 8:31:00 AM

This is really beautiful, Charlotte. 'clocks heavy with time' is my favorite phrase.

John Hamilton

Date: 6/19/2025 6:52:00 AM

So nice Charlotte a worthy winner!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/19/2025 5:49:00 AM

Lovely, Charlotte! That first line is thought-provoking. All at once I see, a child, the flower and a clock. Somehow or another when the child comes to mind I see freckles. Love that second line. Can dive deeper into the final line..slows time and yet I can feel those sun seconds. So lovely, dear!

Paige Hind

Date: 6/18/2025 5:34:00 PM

Gorgeous, Charlotte. Seeped in slow Summer

Tom Woody

Date: 6/18/2025 3:00:00 PM

The slow crawl of summertime and all yet to be reaped. Hope you're having a good week!

Tom Woody
Date: 6/19/2025 6:32:00 AM

Ooh lookie. A win!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/18/2025 12:10:00 PM

- Sunflower a beautiful sight in the summer, Charlotte :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs