Summer Tidings

The
perfumed
petalled rose,
underneath my
nose;
slips
slowly
to the ground-
dies without a
sound
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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George   Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 9:19 AM
TO MY FAVORITES! Brian Elaine
Sheart Avatar
September 4, 2009 at 11:38 PM
Brian Beautifully poetical, the sadness really touches my heart. Love it! Take Care Love Light Truth Patricia
Freeman Avatar
September 4, 2009 at 6:03 PM
Thank God, for life's cycle, A, Brian? Sincerely Moses
Guzzi Avatar
September 4, 2009 at 11:51 AM
sad one Brian. Light & Love
Shahwan Avatar
September 4, 2009 at 10:34 AM
Deep thru' pain... but life continues with your gorgeous poetry to resurrect the blooming roses around. Thank you for commenting my poem. Wishing you all the best. In my opinion...this lanterne is a magical flower between the forms of poetry.
Moreno Avatar
September 4, 2009 at 12:40 AM
Nice rhythm and rhyme, sad image...Raul
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