Summer Temptation

Coolest part of summer tempting ice cream 
Which Lucy never wants to share with Tim, 
Blizzard or Chocolate, 
In her mouth destined to melt,
Although it's absolutely hubby's dream!!!

summerlimerick

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Beata Agustin

Date: 8/23/2024 6:44:00 AM

Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/23/2024 8:29:00 AM

Thank you, Beata. Glad you enjoyed ...really appreciate your sweet comment.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/19/2024 2:11:00 PM

Nice to see this on the winners list. Congrats , my friend

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/23/2024 8:28:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. Nice to be on the list with winners like you!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/18/2024 2:50:00 PM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun Limerick write again. Ice cream anyone???? Have a fun day writing away.....................

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/23/2024 8:26:00 AM

Thank you, Paula. My greatest pleasure in summer is Ice cream!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/18/2024 9:08:00 AM

Mala, congratulations on your winning placement with your cute limerick.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/23/2024 8:24:00 AM

Thank you, Tania. Participating in your contests is a pleasure!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/3/2024 3:23:00 PM

tsk tsk, she should share it, its fun to share, nice witty entry Mala, gl in the contest :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/3/2024 3:38:00 PM

Thank you so much, Dear Rose. I feel so confident after you said “witty entry”!!! I like writing limerick, but hard to come up with funny ideas! Love ~

I Am Anaya

Date: 8/1/2024 12:16:00 PM

That is the best temptation of them all, Mala! I have to try the Blizzard ice cream xo

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/1/2024 9:19:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your fun Limerick write. Now I want some ice cream. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a fun day writing away................................