Summer Tease

summer tease saucy summer sun winks at twilight teasing dawn ~ flirts with the full moon

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Kim Merryman

Date: 7/8/2021 8:03:00 PM

A delightful haiku, Sam! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/15/2021 10:51:00 AM

Thank you so much Kim! While winter can be a rogue, spring can be a tease and autumn frisky summer is the most playful of the seasons for me. Sending you the blessings of summer!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/6/2021 12:17:00 PM

what wonderful personification in a delightful haiku:-) hugs Jan xx

Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/15/2021 11:00:00 AM

Behind again! :(. Thank you Jan for your wonderful feedback! I do love the playful summer sun! Hope you are getting some warm days filled with sunshine! hugs :D"

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/6/2021 11:57:00 AM

Wonderful write. I love it. God bless you always, Love, Gina

Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/15/2021 10:57:00 AM

Thank you so much Gina! I love the playfulness of summer sunshine! Sending you blessings of summer smiles my friend, love and a summer hug!

Smita Kulkarni

Date: 7/6/2021 11:51:00 AM

You poem brought me a smile! Great job!!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/15/2021 10:55:00 AM

Thank you so much Smita! So happy this haiku brought a :) to your heart. Summer does bring a smile to my heart! All the best!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/6/2021 11:41:00 AM

- A beautiful picture, Sam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/15/2021 10:42:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise. Thank you so much! For me, summer sunlight is very playful and quite a tease! hugs of summer sunshine to a sunshine smile! :D"

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/6/2021 11:22:00 AM

Hello Sam, a wonderful haiku. I love the summer sunshine. Shining in the blue sky. Enjoy your day my friend.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/15/2021 10:53:00 AM

Agreed! There is something very special about the blueness of a summer sky! So glad you enjoyed my flirty sun! All the best. Summer blessings of blue skies to you!