Paul Callus Poet Triolet

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Summer Surfing

The blazing sun is shining bright
upon the swell of ocean’s pride. 
An offshore wind is blowing light.
The blazing sun is shining bright.
There are wild horses in full flight.
A surfer takes a curling ride.
The blazing sun is shining bright
upon the swell of ocean’s pride. 


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Contest: One Lovely Summer Triolet
Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich 
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Kim Merryman June 15, 2015 at 10:01 AM A lovely triolet, Paul! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim Paul Callus June 15, 2015 at 3:56 PM Glad you like my triolet Kim. Was pleased to see yours flying high on the winners' list:) Hugs // paul

Sandra Haight June 13, 2015 at 8:43 PM Paul, back again to congratulate you on your win! Yours was one of my favorites! Sandra Paul Callus June 14, 2015 at 7:58 AM Thank you Sandra; I give a lot of weigh to your judgment:) I'm so pleased that you rated this poem high. Have a nice day! // paul

Skat A June 13, 2015 at 6:33 PM PAUL, Congratulations on your LOVELY SUMMER TRIOLET ----- SKAT :-)

Jan Allison June 13, 2015 at 5:49 AM Dropping back with my congrats Paul:-) hugs jan xx Jan Allison June 13, 2015 at 3:57 PM All over now until The Manx Grand Prix at the end August. congrats again on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx Paul Callus June 13, 2015 at 3:54 PM Thank you Jan. I was pleased to see that some students did better than their teacher:) Hope that you have been enjoying the sound of revving motors!:) Hugs // paul

Andrea Dietrich June 13, 2015 at 1:18 AM gosh, paul as I read this one again, I am thinking I should have placed it higher up! Anyway, I enjoyed the visual of riding a wave like it's a horse! congratulations. Paul Callus June 13, 2015 at 3:50 PM Thank you for enjoying this triolet, Andrea; pleased that once again I'm on your winners' list. Have a lovely weekend. // paul

Alexis Y. June 13, 2015 at 1:07 AM Paul, I just stopped by to say congratulations on your win :)Alexis Paul Callus June 13, 2015 at 3:47 PM Thank you Alexis; your congrats are much appreciated. All the best:) // paul

Laura Hay June 4, 2015 at 4:44 PM Great flow from line to line, really enjoyed this, reds Laura Paul Callus June 4, 2015 at 5:37 PM Thank you Laura. Glad you enjoyed, and pleased to meet you:) // paul

Kp Nunez June 2, 2015 at 9:27 PM Just lovely, Paul. Yes, I see what you said that though we wrote on same visual, we have a totally different style. I love your poetry, really. Hop[e to see us both in the results. Hugs! Kim Paul Callus June 3, 2015 at 11:02 AM Thank you for coming over to read my entry, Kim. That's the beauty of poetry....we are able to tackle the same topic in completely different ways. Hope to be standing next to you on the winners' podium:) Hugs // paul

Sandra Haight May 29, 2015 at 3:47 PM Lovely, Paul. You repaint the visual with your beautiful, flowing words. Best wishes for the contest! Sandra Paul Callus May 29, 2015 at 4:06 PM I am pleased that you enjoyed the poem and its flow, Sandra. Thank you for stopping by. All the best. // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen May 28, 2015 at 11:47 AM - Beautiful, a pleasure to read Paul :) - Good luck in the contest! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Paul Callus May 28, 2015 at 12:30 PM Thank you Anne Lise; the pleasure is mine...your visits are always welcome! Hugs:) // paul

Viv Wigley May 27, 2015 at 11:27 PM Bright, fresh, animated, beautifully described verse, Paul. Should do well. #7. Regards, Viv Paul Callus May 28, 2015 at 10:03 AM Hi Viv! Your adjectives are generous and pleasing to the ear! Thank you for a most welcome visit. // paul

Eileen Manassian May 27, 2015 at 10:10 PM That's why you are in my favorite poet folder. You are just such a fantastic writer...and friend. Hugs Paul Callus May 28, 2015 at 10:02 AM Thank you Eileen! I love your comments....they are reciprocated:) Hugs // paul

Sara Kendrick May 27, 2015 at 3:03 PM Very descriptive of the visual that you chose..I enjoyed your work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Paul Callus May 27, 2015 at 3:42 PM Thank you Sara; pleased to have you visiting. // paul

Constance La France May 27, 2015 at 12:54 PM Paul, dazzling with summer sun, so magical the visual, an impressive 7 and thanks for visiting my, Linda-Marie poem Paul Callus May 27, 2015 at 1:54 PM Thank you Constance. That dazzling sun was my main clue to summer, otherwise surfing is also practiced in winter!. Glad you enjoyed. // paul

Nette Onclaud May 27, 2015 at 10:25 AM what a splash of a write, paul... your triolet is one big summer spree!.. huggs Paul Callus May 27, 2015 at 2:32 PM Pleased that you enjoyed it, Nette. Than you for a delightful visit:) // paul

Connie Marcum Wong May 27, 2015 at 2:01 AM Oh Paul, Andrea is going to love this one. I sure do! It is just the kind of poetry I enjoy reading. A visual delight! I hope things are going well for you. Paul Callus May 27, 2015 at 8:23 AM I am pleased that you enjoyed this triolet, Connie...your comments are most encouraging! Coping well (as we all are!) but still awaiting further results. Thank you:) hugs // paul

Sneha Rv May 26, 2015 at 9:41 PM I loved the imagery!! All the best in the contest!! :D :D Paul Callus May 27, 2015 at 7:58 AM Thank you Sneha. I enjoyed your triolet, too! :) // paul

Casarah Nance May 26, 2015 at 7:14 PM Upon the swell of ocean's pride...oh it sounds strong and mighty. Powerful, yes. What a magnificent description. :) Paul Callus May 27, 2015 at 7:55 AM Thank you for reading and commenting so positively, Casarah. It's always lovely to have you visiting! hugs // paul

Jan Allison May 26, 2015 at 6:00 PM Beautiful imagery Paul Good luck in the contest - this is the first one I have seen for this image:-) Hugs Jan xx Paul Callus May 27, 2015 at 4:17 AM Thank you Jan, for the lovely visit ...and for the benefit of your keen eye:) Hugs // paul