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Summer sunset streams- soon sundown springs- so splendid, splashing softly, seizing skies. Surrendering stale sapphire, shaping strings; surreally setting scenes, soon stirring sighs. So silently, smoked shadows structure, shape- spur, sharpen, sunset silhouettes- so stark; Streaked salmon, saffron, scarlet- showy scape sets spatial sights supplying sundown spark. Serenity surrounds- sun sinking slow; striking sunset stuns, sharing scenic show.
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