Summer Storm

The thunder in your voice precocious in the dawn
Mighty tower of white crashing down a frothy song
As sand shook beneath my shore planted feet
The rushing wave covered the beach like a sheet

Ominous the clouds overhead trying to complete
Steely grey mood marries horizon to sky and fierce sea
As shore birds dip and dive in momentary shadow fall
Their wings lift above the relentless roiling brawl

A flash of light as thunder answers thunders call
Closer the blackened smudge comes the summer storm
Quick my steps of retreat before the cold rain spills
My vision full of mother natures’ bilious thrills 


written June 2, 2020

Brian's Select 3 contest  7-3-2020 NA
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Mishra Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 1:52 AM
Oh this is lovely Jenne! For me, it paints a picture of the deepest conquests in my heart when I walk towards light waging my way through storms. Congratulations on your win. Much love :)
Faulkner Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 5:02 PM
I am happy to return to offer you congratulations, Jeanne, magnificent write!
Hamilton Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 9:35 AM
This is a great write Jeanne, glad to see it in the winners circle!
Faulkner Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 11:25 AM
This makes me think of winter beaches - great word choices, especially 'ominious' 'brawl' and 'billous' - thrilling indeed!
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