Summer Sounds

The Cicadas sing so loudly
Drowning out everything
Except the airplane 
Soaring, roaring overhead -

But the Dragonfly is so quiet
As it daintily alights
Upon a pinker than pink 
Lotus blossom
Then takes off in flight

In a nearby weeping willow tree
A Robin sing somewhere above me
His warbling song
An aural delight of myriad notes

But I came all this way
With bulky binoculars 
Hoping a Hummingbird
Or two - would appear
Just as I had planned

But they had other ideas
For I thought I heard them 
Snickering nearby
At my hubris for thinking
I could coax them out of the trees
Just for my benefit!


For Laura Mackenzie's "Sounds of Summer"  contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/29/2016 10:21:00 PM
Corinne, Well done. Glad to read your poem today. Love -LINDA-
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Date: 6/6/2010 7:25:00 AM
SOUP MAIL... URGENT ...
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Date: 6/2/2010 4:15:00 PM
Hey Corinne congrats on your HM in Laura's contest with this great write so beautiful... enjoy another honor my friend.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 5/29/2010 8:36:00 PM
this is pure delight, Corinne!! I hope it does very well in the contest. THanks so much for seeing my blog and don't worry about all caps in front. Many magazines accept that style. I am not the norm on how i do my lines. I can't even figure out how to make my computer NOT do caps in front of each line and I have to go thru line after line, fixing the lines i don't want to begin with a captitalized letter! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 5/29/2010 4:23:00 AM
Corinne - I could see you standing there with a pair of binoculars hanging around your neck - Plenty of hummingbirds around here - I have a sort of special bond with them that simply amazes folk - Great poem, YF4L, God Bless, mj
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Date: 5/27/2010 7:03:00 PM
Lovely write Corinne and good luck in Laura's contest.. she has not judged as yet..so good to see u comment on my blog today... its an awesome sight for sure and I luve the Jersey shore for many reasons but they are very patriotic and since my youngest is in Iraq right now its even more special... appreciate and hope to see more of your poetry soon... luv.. Linda-Marie.. keep in touch.. my e mail is: petitepoetess@yahoo.com
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Date: 5/23/2010 5:23:00 PM
sigh..haven't heard from you in too long....you are missed. Light & Love
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Date: 4/26/2010 7:50:00 AM
Working in N.Y.C. How exciting! I almost forgot that other people have to work for a living. Your poem has the Big Apple flavor. I'll take a bite. Love, daver
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Date: 4/19/2010 11:37:00 PM
thank you for your welcome blog comments Corinne.Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/16/2010 5:26:00 PM
Corine~ Great use of imagery I really enjoyed reading this I wish you well in the contest! Laura :)
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Date: 4/16/2010 1:45:00 PM
Those bulky binoculars had me smiling,I enjoyed so much this lovely poetry,.Charma
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Date: 4/16/2010 10:36:00 AM
i thought this was a very nice poem, thanks for the read
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