Summer Sonnet: River-Woman
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July 16, 2025
Contest: Summer Sonnets
Sponsor: X F Lacasse
*contest option: creative punctuation
Awakened! I returned a stream in Spring
to flow and grow on nature’s snowmelt milk.
I came to be of earth and sky (...a fling),
my sire a winter storm. Like liquid silk
emerging, I was born; a water-child.
Between two banks I nestled with my dreams
and bloomed a gAnGLy creek ‘til solstice. Wild
I played— not meek but sleek. I crested s-e-a-m-s,
a juvenile with ~snaky-curves~ and —==>speed.
Mid June rebellion, ripples bared, I’d run
as sweet as rum and swelled with rain, (a)greed;
the gasoline with which my wish was spun…
by August dusk, a river-woman reigned!
Oh, stars — those s.t.u.d.s — did rise [as if ordained].
Copyright © Susan Ashley | Year Posted 2025
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