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Summer Sonnet: River-Woman

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July 16, 2025

Contest: Summer Sonnets
Sponsor: X F Lacasse

*contest option: creative punctuation


 

Awakened! I returned a stream in Spring to flow and grow on nature’s snowmelt milk. I came to be of earth and sky (...a fling), my sire a winter storm. Like liquid silk emerging, I was born; a water-child. Between two banks I nestled with my dreams and bloomed a gAnGLy creek ‘til solstice. Wild I played— not meek but sleek. I crested s-e-a-m-s, a juvenile with ~snaky-curves~ and —==>speed. Mid June rebellion, ripples bared, I’d run as sweet as rum and swelled with rain, (a)greed; the gasoline with which my wish was spun… by August dusk, a river-woman reigned! Oh, stars — those s.t.u.d.s — did rise [as if ordained].

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Date: 7/18/2025 4:24:00 AM
Your words flow as beautifully as the river you describe, Susan. The vivid imagery and rhythm capture the wild, evolving spirit of nature—and life—so well. A truly lyrical journey!
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Date: 7/17/2025 5:50:00 PM
Your creativity abounds in this fine Sonnet, Susan. I always enjoy a well-written Sonnet. Thanks for sharing this one with us today, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 7/17/2025 12:30:00 PM
Gosh, wow - I'm speechless. Your metaphors are really so truly original - and I so admire you for that. Amazing.
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Date: 7/17/2025 7:23:00 AM
extraordinary contemporary sonnet, i absolutely love it! are you a water sign by any chance?
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Date: 7/17/2025 7:12:00 AM
A new Suze! How you managed to maintain perfect iambic meter with this quirky, oddly punctuated write (perfect for the theme) I'll never know. It just highlights your extraordinary poetic skill. And of course, the water reference was a must. Very nice
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