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Summer Song

I love to season sense engage.
It clears parts mortality dazed.

When young, summer’s tune range
is firmly, soul-deep engraved.

When grown, human ways hush
man's faith with factual mush.

Summer composed odes grant
faith prose that hopes maintain.
The soft song of a summer breeze
lifts aloft a wonderous spree
of smoothed, spliced rapture
too song silky for feel capture.

Summer’s charming, velvet songs
hold notes of mystical essence
assuring we’re a spiritual presence.
Seasonal airs of sensual flairs
are fluid trilled, space tilled, and
sound honed by summer’s hymn.

Feeling air's first tune blend, 
early man named it wind.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/7/2019 9:04:00 PM
CayCay what a wonderful write! Well deserved win my dear! Congrats!
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Date: 6/7/2019 6:31:00 PM
Wow, I loved this mecuriel song that sings the senses of summer CayCay. This gorgeous poem is going into my faves! Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest. I meant to fave it last time. I have been so busy. I will write and tell you all about it. Hugs, Connie : )
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Date: 9/21/2018 2:14:00 PM
I am very happy to see this in the top three CayCay. Very deserving! Congratulations on your win! : )
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Date: 9/20/2018 7:37:00 AM
Congratulations for your win :)
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Date: 9/20/2018 4:30:00 AM
Congratulations, CayCay on your win.
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Date: 9/20/2018 12:58:00 AM
Back to wish you congratulations on your win with this inspiring write!
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Date: 9/19/2018 7:41:00 PM
The sweet sounds of "summer's charming, velvet songs"...Congrats on your win CayCay..
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Date: 9/2/2018 3:48:00 PM
I love the last line, and the entire description is so moving!
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Date: 9/2/2018 12:22:00 PM
Wow! You have such a flair for writing in an unusual way. Very unique and interesting and this poem invokes wonderful imaginings of a warm summer breeze in my hair.
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Date: 9/2/2018 11:26:00 AM
Love this! So descriptive. Everyone knows summer & a breeze. As such, we take both for granted. Then along comes a poem that so accurately & eloquently framed this phenomenon again for us. Thank you. So refreshing!
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Date: 9/1/2018 11:22:00 PM
This is simply beautiful CayCay! I have been doing so much reading today that my eyes are crossing. Had to make one stop here to visit you To see if you had anything new. This should fair very well on the contest my friend : )
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Date: 9/1/2018 2:35:00 PM
Wonderful entry CayCay, best wishes...
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