Summer Song

I love to season sense engage.
It clears parts mortality dazed.

When young, summer’s tune range
is firmly, soul-deep engraved.

When grown, human ways hush
man's faith with factual mush.

Summer composed odes grant
faith prose that hopes maintain.
The soft song of a summer breeze
lifts aloft a wonderous spree
of smoothed, spliced rapture
too song silky for feel capture.

Summer’s charming, velvet songs
hold notes of mystical essence
assuring we’re a spiritual presence.
Seasonal airs of sensual flairs
are fluid trilled, space tilled, and
sound honed by summer’s hymn.

Feeling air's first tune blend, 
early man named it wind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Chiri Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 9:04 PM
CayCay what a wonderful write! Well deserved win my dear! Congrats!
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 6:31 PM
Wow, I loved this mecuriel song that sings the senses of summer CayCay. This gorgeous poem is going into my faves! Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest. I meant to fave it last time. I have been so busy. I will write and tell you all about it. Hugs, Connie : )
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 2:14 PM
I am very happy to see this in the top three CayCay. Very deserving! Congratulations on your win! : )
Sands Avatar
September 20, 2018 at 7:37 AM
Congratulations for your win :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 20, 2018 at 4:30 AM
Congratulations, CayCay on your win.
Faulkner Avatar
September 20, 2018 at 12:58 AM
Back to wish you congratulations on your win with this inspiring write!
May Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 7:41 PM
The sweet sounds of "summer's charming, velvet songs"...Congrats on your win CayCay..
Faulkner Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 3:48 PM
I love the last line, and the entire description is so moving!
Duet Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 12:22 PM
Wow! You have such a flair for writing in an unusual way. Very unique and interesting and this poem invokes wonderful imaginings of a warm summer breeze in my hair.
Wegman Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 11:26 AM
Love this! So descriptive. Everyone knows summer & a breeze. As such, we take both for granted. Then along comes a poem that so accurately & eloquently framed this phenomenon again for us. Thank you. So refreshing!
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 11:22 PM
This is simply beautiful CayCay! I have been doing so much reading today that my eyes are crossing. Had to make one stop here to visit you To see if you had anything new. This should fair very well on the contest my friend : )
Smith Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 2:35 PM
Wonderful entry CayCay, best wishes...
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