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Summer Snow

Cotton flies like summer snow
Through the little city with no one to clothe
Descended from giants whose purpose long forgotten
That even in this fabricated world...
Nothing feels better than cotton
Fluffy clouds carry the tiny seeds
Across the wind with no one in need
The white puffs dance and twist and weave
Like tiny sprites in the summer breeze
Till finally they must hit the ground
Or whatever else happens to be lying around
They line the dirt trails and driveways and streets
Sticking to everything that they meet
They give a soft feel to month of June
But of a light white dusting nothing is immune
I saw my dog salted and thought into what has she gotten?
Then laughed and said "Oh!"
"It's that cotton pickin, frickin cotton!"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
December 11, 2017 at 2:08 PM
I remember this one and how much I love it!
Hagy Avatar
December 12, 2017 at 8:52 PM
Your sweet Andrea :) Thanks for revisiting :) C.H.
Dietrich Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 1:29 AM
I don't think I had given this one a listen previously! it's so nice hearing you read it this time. it is one of my favorites of what you have written. (great emoting at the end. I did that when I read my Desperate Housewives poem. haha) gonna fave this one too.
Hagy Avatar
August 20, 2016 at 7:50 PM
Glad you liked this Andrea...I read the Desperate Housewife...loved it!:)
Salehi Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 12:14 AM
I liked your frickin cotton....
Salehi Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 8:35 PM
You're very talented... thanks for stopping by and reading one of my ghazals.... Maybe, I should write one and dedicate to you and your summer snow.....
Hagy Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 7:14 PM
Thanks for reading, glad you liked it:) Reading other poets has helped me to broaden my poetry perspective!
Callus Avatar
June 30, 2016 at 10:29 AM
Lovely and enjoyable, Chris! Malta used to be famous for cotton growing, but now young ones would not even know what cotton plants are! Tickled by your ending, too:) Regards // paul
Hagy Avatar
July 1, 2016 at 6:00 PM
Thanks Paul, glad you enjoyed it...guess all that cotton flying around here makes for a "fluffy" ending!:)
Rycroft Avatar
June 20, 2016 at 3:56 AM
Very good excellent spoken frickin cotton xx
Hagy Avatar
June 20, 2016 at 7:28 PM
Thanks Wendy...just how the last line rolled out!:)
Dietrich Avatar
June 17, 2016 at 7:36 AM
haha. the last lines so adorable. Very cute poetry.
Hagy Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 6:31 PM
Thanks for reading...glad you got a laugh!
A  Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 11:28 PM
Chris, what a rant....lol...made me chuckle... Enjoyed. Skat
Hagy Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 6:37 PM
Thanks for reading...I usually rant when I'm frustrated, this one fell into my lap...literally! lol!
Smith Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 9:07 PM
Good one Chris. I remember lighting it on fire as a kid...it would spread real fast.
Hagy Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 6:46 PM
Yikes!...although I confess when I was a teenager and had a crazy boyfriend, we used to set bic lighters on fire!
Hoffman Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 8:06 PM
Cute title and poem Chris! So true that nothing feels better than cotton!:)
Hagy Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 7:03 PM
Thanks for stopping by...cotton is definitely my choice in hot summer weather!
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