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Summer Snow

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Cotton flies like summer snow Through the little city with no one to clothe Descended from giants whose purpose long forgotten That even in this fabricated world... Nothing feels better than cotton Fluffy clouds carry the tiny seeds Across the wind with no one in need The white puffs dance and twist and weave Like tiny sprites in the summer breeze Till finally they must hit the ground Or whatever else happens to be lying around They line the dirt trails and driveways and streets Sticking to everything that they meet They give a soft feel to month of June But of a light white dusting nothing is immune I saw my dog salted and thought into what has she gotten? Then laughed and said "Oh!" "It's that cotton pickin, frickin cotton!"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/11/2017 2:08:00 PM
I remember this one and how much I love it!
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Chris Hagy
Date: 12/12/2017 8:52:00 PM
Your sweet Andrea :) Thanks for revisiting :) C.H.
Date: 8/19/2016 1:29:00 AM
I don't think I had given this one a listen previously! it's so nice hearing you read it this time. it is one of my favorites of what you have written. (great emoting at the end. I did that when I read my Desperate Housewives poem. haha) gonna fave this one too.
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Chris Hagy
Date: 8/20/2016 7:50:00 PM
Glad you liked this Andrea...I read the Desperate Housewife...loved it!:)
Date: 7/31/2016 12:14:00 AM
I liked your frickin cotton....
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/2/2016 8:35:00 PM
You're very talented... thanks for stopping by and reading one of my ghazals.... Maybe, I should write one and dedicate to you and your summer snow.....
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Chris Hagy
Date: 8/2/2016 7:14:00 PM
Thanks for reading, glad you liked it:) Reading other poets has helped me to broaden my poetry perspective!
Date: 6/30/2016 10:29:00 AM
Lovely and enjoyable, Chris! Malta used to be famous for cotton growing, but now young ones would not even know what cotton plants are! Tickled by your ending, too:) Regards // paul
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Chris Hagy
Date: 7/1/2016 6:00:00 PM
Thanks Paul, glad you enjoyed it...guess all that cotton flying around here makes for a "fluffy" ending!:)
Date: 6/20/2016 3:56:00 AM
Very good excellent spoken frickin cotton xx
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Chris Hagy
Date: 6/20/2016 7:28:00 PM
Thanks Wendy...just how the last line rolled out!:)
Date: 6/17/2016 7:36:00 AM
haha. the last lines so adorable. Very cute poetry.
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Chris Hagy
Date: 6/18/2016 6:31:00 PM
Thanks for reading...glad you got a laugh!
Date: 6/16/2016 11:28:00 PM
Chris, what a rant....lol...made me chuckle... Enjoyed. Skat
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Chris Hagy
Date: 6/18/2016 6:37:00 PM
Thanks for reading...I usually rant when I'm frustrated, this one fell into my lap...literally! lol!
Date: 6/16/2016 9:07:00 PM
Good one Chris. I remember lighting it on fire as a kid...it would spread real fast.
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Chris Hagy
Date: 6/18/2016 6:46:00 PM
Yikes!...although I confess when I was a teenager and had a crazy boyfriend, we used to set bic lighters on fire!
Date: 6/16/2016 8:06:00 PM
Cute title and poem Chris! So true that nothing feels better than cotton!:)
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Chris Hagy
Date: 6/18/2016 7:03:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by...cotton is definitely my choice in hot summer weather!

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