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Summer Sea

Sand between toes as the warm breeze flaps our towels by the summer sea. Children's laughter splashing is such a tease. Can't resist, in we run, you and me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 7/4/2019 12:48:00 AM
The imagery in this poem is pure joy Jean! So happy to get to read this because of Luloo's contest. Congratulations on your first placement! xxoo : )
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Jean Murray
Date: 7/4/2019 1:01:00 AM
Morning Connie. Some poems feel more satisfying on completion and this was one of those. Thank you for your lovely visit.
Date: 5/13/2019 6:57:00 AM
Ooh...a lovely quatrain! All senses loaded!
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Date: 5/13/2019 7:00:00 AM
Here's hoping thay hit the mark Kim.
Date: 5/6/2019 10:29:00 AM
Such a happy little poem for the beginning of warm weather.
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Date: 5/6/2019 11:37:00 AM
Just like your name Sunlite. Thank you.

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