Summer Sea

Sand between toes as the warm breeze
flaps our towels by the summer sea.
Children's laughter splashing is such a tease.
Can't resist, in we run, you and me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Marcum Wong Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 12:48 AM
The imagery in this poem is pure joy Jean! So happy to get to read this because of Luloo's contest. Congratulations on your first placement! xxoo : )
Murray Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 1:01 AM
Morning Connie. Some poems feel more satisfying on completion and this was one of those. Thank you for your lovely visit.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 6:57 AM
Ooh...a lovely quatrain! All senses loaded!
Murray Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 7:00 AM
Here's hoping thay hit the mark Kim.
Wanter Avatar
May 6, 2019 at 10:29 AM
Such a happy little poem for the beginning of warm weather.
Murray Avatar
May 6, 2019 at 11:37 AM
Just like your name Sunlite. Thank you.
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