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Summer Rispetto

Summer lures artists to a paint brush of joy Magic spells cast for family vacation Dreams of finding love... a teenage girl and boy Fresh picked homegrown garden of vegetation Vibrant myrtle releases its sweet array Blossom petaled fragrance as is nature's way Long hours in fields working crops... farmers and wives Golden hay bales are signs of summer goodbyes July 30, 2018
Picture Me A Summer Rispetto Contest By Barry Stebblings Rhyme Scheme ABAB CCDD Third Place

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Date: 8/7/2018 4:14:00 PM
Such a magical arrangement of summer's finest moments, Susan. Outstanding poesy! Congrats on your richly-deserved win! Best always, Gershon
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/8/2018 12:55:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon. Glad to see you back. Big Smile here.
Date: 8/7/2018 12:12:00 PM
BIG congratulations, Susan, on your win. After reading this lovely summer poem, I am encouraged to go on a nice vacation! Hugs and best regards. Pandita
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/8/2018 12:53:00 AM
Thank you. Hugs
Date: 8/7/2018 7:51:00 AM
This is beautiful, Susan. CONGRATS! :-) Janice
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/8/2018 12:53:00 AM
Thank you, Janice.
Date: 8/6/2018 2:25:00 AM
Susan, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/6/2018 5:34:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 8/5/2018 6:04:00 AM
Congrats on your win Susan
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/6/2018 12:27:00 AM
Thanks so much.
Date: 8/4/2018 7:27:00 PM
Love your images for summer Susan - Congrats on winner.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/6/2018 12:26:00 AM
Thanks, Virginia.
Date: 8/4/2018 5:05:00 AM
Hi Susan, an excellent Rispetto describing moments within summer's glory. As always Susan, your words pain such a beautiful canvas that springs to life within the mind. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/6/2018 12:26:00 AM
Oh thank you! What a wonderful comment. :)
Date: 8/3/2018 11:54:00 AM
Your description of summer and so much we associate with it is magical, Susan. This is excellent work. I am not really familiar with the rispetto form, but I do know what I enjoy reading. Hugs, Carolyn
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/6/2018 12:25:00 AM
Thank you, Carolyn. Appreciate.
Date: 8/2/2018 6:44:00 PM
Such a vision Susan...I savored the moment...loved your rispetto of summer...love & light...^WW^
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/3/2018 12:34:00 AM
Thank you very much! :)
Date: 8/2/2018 6:59:00 AM
Very beautiful picture of summer portrayed here, Susan:)
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/2/2018 3:26:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 8/1/2018 3:48:00 PM
Oh, those familiar and wonderful sentimental senses we have of summer, so well portrayed here.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/1/2018 11:57:00 PM
Thanks so much.
Date: 8/1/2018 1:17:00 AM
I know nothing of this contest (not yet), but I sure enjoyed each and every sense pleasure your imagery brought my way. A poem to inhale! Also, I very much relate to summer good-byes. You touched many of my places - thank you. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/1/2018 11:57:00 PM
Thank you! :)
Date: 7/31/2018 10:32:00 PM
Susan, your words are beautifully put together as always. Good luck in the contest. "golden fields of hay sign of summer goodbyes" remind me of the midwest.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/1/2018 11:56:00 PM
Ahhh yes. Thank you for your kibd comment.
Date: 7/30/2018 8:03:00 AM
Lovely verse Susana, the summer waning with hay in the fields. Good luck. Tom
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Susan Gentry
Date: 7/30/2018 2:18:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 7/30/2018 6:54:00 AM
Lovely imagery, Susan.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 7/30/2018 2:18:00 PM
Thanks, Line.
Date: 7/30/2018 4:35:00 AM
What a charming poem Susan I especially loved the third line, made me think of 'summer lovin' from Grease:-) hugs jan xx
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Susan Gentry
Date: 7/30/2018 2:17:00 PM
Thank you.

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