Summer Rain Showers

summer rain showers steam rises from the pavement walking in bare feet

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/9/2011 12:10:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this one..Brings back memories..That rain would cool the hot city pavement or hot paved roads and the water would be just warm and very pleasant..Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/9/2011 12:11:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara Kendrick

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/29/2011 1:36:00 PM

I enjoyed the turn of thought in the last line as it should be in a haiku

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/29/2011 11:56:00 AM

I positively enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Barbara. I hope to be back again tomorrow to read some more. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/28/2011 11:49:00 PM

ohhh, this is NICE