Summer Rain

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Serotinal days, pouring rain eased drought Some were blessed with right amount, others flood While some enjoy late summer garden sprout Some work to throw out piles of rotting crud Summer rain upon forest fire, drowns out Summer rain on saturated ground scud Blessings of showers or torture from storm We know God yet does miracles perform

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Silent One

Date: 9/6/2017 12:37:00 PM

Great imagery in your poem and great use of vocabulary.. I learnt a new word from your poem..

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/6/2017 2:29:00 PM

SO, Wonderful that you learned a new word..It is fun being exposed to words that we did not know exsisted..There are so many words in the English language and it continuously changes with introduction of new words for us to use..Thanks for the kind review..Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/6/2017 4:59:00 AM

This is truly a magnificent write my friend! You have delighted me to the fullest by your incredible pen this morning! What a truly amazing piece here Sara! Great Work!!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/6/2017 6:22:00 AM

Russell, Thanks for dropping by..You seem chipper after having a back injury..You must be made of tough stuff..Sara

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/5/2017 4:31:00 PM

Well done Sara. The examples written about and then a great ending :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/5/2017 4:38:00 PM

Heidi, Your kind review is uplifting..I appreciate you dropping by..The examples are ever present on our mind right now..Sara