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Summer Rain

When Rain Came to the Valley

In swelter’s grip, they struggled day to day.
Sweat dripped from them. They barely could keep sane.
In stifling rooms each night they knelt to pray
for God to save their crops with precious rain.
One August morn, their fears got washed away.
They knew their prayers had not been in vain.
They woke up to the sound of pitter-pat.
No sweeter sound in all the world was that!

The pitter-pat got loud and very strong.
From valley houses came their cries of glee.
Rain’s sound seemed to their ears like angels’ song.
Like children running into waves of sea,
they ran and leaped in it, a happy throng
whose suffering at once they all saw flee,
and later, in the twilight’s cool they knelt
to tell their Lord the gratitude they felt.


Sept. 4, 2017 for Dale Gregory Cozart's Summer Rain Storm Poetry Contest
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Medders Tobechi Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 8:44 PM
A well deserved win for a fine poem. Love what you did with the iambic pentameter. Congratulations.
Shetley Avatar
September 12, 2017 at 10:42 PM
I adore a good nostalgia piece. At least that's how it made me feel. Your work is always such a pleasure.
Gasun Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 9:50 AM
Congratulations for your win and for this stunning piece my dear friend, Andrea! Thanks for sharing! Dropping by to greet you a Happy Belated Birthday! Hope it was not too late yet to come and greet you with my best wishes along with big b-day hugs and kisses! I wrote a simple poem for you. So simple but composed from the bottom of my heart, hope you'll enjoy it. Please go and read if you've time. May God bless you always! <3leonora
Roberts Avatar
September 7, 2017 at 6:45 AM
A lovely form for your storm Congratulations
Smith Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 8:05 PM
Beautiful work Andrea, congratulations...
Allison Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 3:51 PM
Can't believe that I missed this gem congratulations Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
Kendrick Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 5:07 AM
Way to go with your winning work..Farmers who totally depend on the crops to live learn to depend more on God..Congrats..Sara
Pett Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 3:23 AM
Beautiful poem, congratulations on your well deserved win Andrea. :))
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 2:13 AM
A superb entry Andrea! I hope to see this on the winner's list. : )
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 2:18 AM
Oh...I see it won second place! Big Congrats Andrea! : )
Canerdy Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 9:22 PM
Absolutely wonderful, Andrea! Congrats. Janice
Rodrigues Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 8:48 PM
A wonderful write! Congrats, Andrea!
Roper Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 8:20 PM
Back, to congratulate you on your win Hugs Eve ~`*
Ashley Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 6:46 PM
Congratulations Andrea on your win! Beautiful poem :)
Pandit Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 4:48 PM
Congrats Andrea for your top win!
Anish Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 4:41 PM
This poem reminds me of an episode on the old TV show "Bonaza". I feel some gratitude to the higher powers since I have recovered from life threatening ills in the past I got around to posting a new one today. Hope you like it! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Cozart Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 4:37 PM
Congratulations on your 2nd Place win! This was a VERY tough contest to judge. Thank you so much for taking the time to enter.
Cozart Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 4:36 PM
Congratulations on your 2nd Place win! This was a VERY tough contest to judge. Thank you so much for taking the time to enter.
Wood Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 12:54 PM
Pitter-pat. I live in the desert Andrea. You must have lived this peril and gratitude to portray it so well. Wonderful poem!
B. Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 12:47 PM
Mother Nature sure can be cruel and unpredictable.
Thirtyseven Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 9:18 AM
Your words weave a most emotive, sensational write. Nice.
Warrior Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 8:17 AM
Beautifully done Andrea...you don't need much luck lol...a winner already...god bless...^WW^
Muideen Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 5:58 AM
This is a very beautiful poem, Andrea. It flows eloquent and penned well.
Sivey Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 5:51 AM
This is such a beautiful write I was just smiling so broadly at the end! I truly loved reading this illustrious poem this morning! You have brought to me such a delightful imagining of this instance, I bet those in California experienced this after they had that mega drought! What a fantastic piece, Great Work my friend!!
Kannan Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 4:02 AM
Wow! Wonderful poetry Andrea. Loved it. I love the summer rain.so true, rain's sound is really angel's song. Well written. Hope it does well in the contest...
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 3:04 AM
You really excel in forms like this Andrea. I'm sure this one will do well! : )
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