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Summer Night

[5-3-5 syllables] a clear summer night - gem-studded the sky’s sparkling dress [3-5-3 words] among tomato plants in a hot summer night - a cricket symphony - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Lune (Mixed Pair) Contest Sponsor: William Kekaula Posted 17th October 2021

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Date: 5/13/2022 9:30:00 AM
Wonderful Haiku! Imaginary! Have a great day!:)
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/19/2022 12:21:00 PM
Thank you for your pleasant visit, Komal. May you too have a lovely day :) // paul
Date: 1/27/2022 3:59:00 AM
Two very nice haiku poems. I can almost smell the tomato plants and hear the crickets...lovely, Delice
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Date: 5/19/2022 12:20:00 PM
Please excuse my very late reply dear Delice! I had no inkling of your visit, and it was thanks to the above comment by Komal that I got to know. Thank you for the visit and lovely comments. Best regards // paul
Date: 11/22/2021 10:26:00 PM
These are very cute, Paul, winners in my eyes:)
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Date: 11/23/2021 11:34:00 AM
Thank you, Jo. I'd have loved for you to be judge of this contest :) ~ Best regards // paul
Date: 11/15/2021 1:50:00 PM
these are SO nice. I hope they won!! I recall mine didn't.
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Date: 11/16/2021 1:46:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. I have a feeling mine and yours were left out in the cold :) ~ Warm regards // paul
Date: 11/14/2021 7:04:00 AM
beautiful haikus here, my friend
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Paul Callus
Date: 11/14/2021 10:07:00 AM
Thank you, Jack. Hope life is being kind to you. Best regards // paul
Date: 11/8/2021 8:27:00 AM
Nice description on both these haiku Paul. love phyl
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Paul Callus
Date: 11/13/2021 1:17:00 PM
Thank you so much, Phyllis! Love // paul
Date: 11/8/2021 8:00:00 AM
Your words are magical!! Narrated everything. Best wishes.. Priya
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Paul Callus
Date: 11/13/2021 1:18:00 PM
Thank you for your generous comments, Priya...much appreciated. Best regards // paul
Date: 11/5/2021 11:09:00 PM
Exquisite Paul! You will have to share these at PFT. A fave from me. Blessings xxoo
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Paul Callus
Date: 11/8/2021 7:30:00 AM
Thank you dear Connie. I will share as soon as I finish from here :) My time has not been my own lately!! The fav is also much appreciated. ~ Warm regards // paul
Date: 11/5/2021 6:52:00 AM
Good Morning Paul - It appears that you have mastered this unique format. Your execution has the voice tone and flow along with imagery. Thank you for sharing. Keep enjoying poetry and poetrysoup.
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Date: 11/8/2021 7:22:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Lisa. Your lovely feedback is a pleasure to read. ~ Warm regards // paul
Date: 11/4/2021 12:16:00 PM
Wonderful imagery in both of these ! I feel the environments you have created in just a few words . All the best , Susan :)
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Date: 11/8/2021 7:16:00 AM
Thank you for a most delightful visit, Susan! Enjoy the week ahead :) Regards // paul
Date: 11/1/2021 7:03:00 AM
Beautiful imagery
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Paul Callus
Date: 11/8/2021 6:58:00 AM
Thank you, Paghunda. Best regards // paul
Date: 10/27/2021 7:40:00 PM
Now you have me wishing for summer when we are just going into winter. Nice haiku Paul. love phyl
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Paul Callus
Date: 11/8/2021 6:53:00 AM
Thank you, Phyllis. No harm in wishing for and dreaming of summer :) Enjoy the week ahead! // paul
Date: 10/25/2021 2:27:00 AM
Very nice indeed Paul...Delice
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Paul Callus
Date: 11/8/2021 6:52:00 AM
I'm pleased you liked it, Delice....thank you. Regards // paul
Date: 10/25/2021 1:30:00 AM
You are magic, Paul Pangie
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Date: 10/24/2021 1:38:00 PM
Love it! Awesome thoughts, especially the sky's sparkling dress! Love that. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Date: 11/8/2021 6:51:00 AM
Thank you Gina. Always nice to receive your lovely visits and blessings! ~ Best regards // paul
Date: 10/24/2021 9:54:00 AM
Paul, your beautifully crafted Haiku reveals an enormous story....Good luck in the contest....I think this is TOPS! Blessings, Paulette
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Paul Callus
Date: 11/8/2021 6:50:00 AM
Thank you for the complimentary remarks, Paulette! Pls excuse the late acknowledgement of your visit...have been away from Soup...needed a break :) Regards // paul
Date: 10/24/2021 3:17:00 AM
Paul this is lovely. You involve all senses. The sky has a dress! And that's the perfect outfit for the cricket symphony!
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Paul Callus
Date: 10/24/2021 7:08:00 AM
Thank you, Karen...your feedback is absolutely correct; I could not have said it any better myself! :) Best regards // paul
Date: 10/23/2021 11:50:00 AM
Your "Summer Night" is a wonderful Haiku write. Just 3 lines and you told a fun story. Have a blessed autumn day..............
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Date: 10/24/2021 2:04:00 AM
Thank you Paula. Sometimes we can say more in less :) I hope you are having a lovely weekend. Blessings...paul
Date: 10/22/2021 7:26:00 PM
Dearest Paul, my senses are delighted by your enchanting set of lune poems. Your imagery brings me into the beauty of a summer night. I hope all is well, my wonderful friend, your inspiring presence has been sorely missed. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/24/2021 2:03:00 AM
Thank you for your pleasant visit and lovely feedback, dear Susan. Life is full to the brim, and I have had little time to be active on Soup. Warm regards and hugs, my friend. // paul
Date: 10/19/2021 11:00:00 PM
Both of these, are so visual Paul. Love 'em
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Date: 10/24/2021 2:00:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed, Harry...thank you. Regards // paul
Date: 10/18/2021 3:04:00 PM
you captured summer so beautifully i especially love the imagery in the first poem:-) love to you and the family:-) hugs jan xx
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Paul Callus
Date: 10/24/2021 1:59:00 AM
Thank you, Jan. Here summer has slowly been replaced by autumn, but the weather is still quite warm...still good for swimming. Love to all of you :) Hugs // paul
Date: 10/18/2021 1:42:00 PM
Paul, you have distilled the pure essence of joy in a summer night WITH crickets! Wonderfully peaceful with the serenade of crickets. My favorite summer night. Best wishes for the contest.
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Paul Callus
Date: 10/24/2021 1:57:00 AM
Thank you, Sam. Summer nights can be really beautiful and inspiring, especially for those who live out in the country! Regards // paul
Date: 10/18/2021 7:22:00 AM
Nicely done. I do love listening to the crickets in the evening. My garden on a hot summer night. God Bless, JB
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Paul Callus
Date: 10/24/2021 1:55:00 AM
Thank you, Judy. We used to have many crickets, and I loved listening to them, especially on my grandad's farm, but now they seem to be disappearing. Best regards // paul
Date: 10/18/2021 6:57:00 AM
Wonderful images of summer, Paul. All the best.
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Paul Callus
Date: 10/24/2021 1:53:00 AM
Thank you for liking, Vijay. Best regards // paul
Date: 10/17/2021 4:17:00 PM
your poems have captured a summer night so well, paul! best of luck in the contest...
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Paul Callus
Date: 10/24/2021 1:52:00 AM
Thank you for the visit and comments, Ilene. Best regards, my friend. // paul
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