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summer memory --sandcastles--

. sunburned, sleeping child-- another summer memory is swept out to sea

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/7/2010 3:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 12/7/2010 5:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Carrie in S K A T*s "Sandcastle Haiku"contest. Love,Carol
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Date: 12/6/2010 9:59:00 PM
ONe of the most haiku-ish ones I have seen. LOVE THIS.
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Date: 12/6/2010 7:01:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your win-kashinath
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Date: 12/6/2010 3:38:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on another big win in Irma's contest with this exceptional entry luv.. enjoy another top ten sweet success tonight with luv..
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Date: 12/6/2010 12:16:00 PM
good to see your name out there, Carrie and all the best.
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Date: 12/6/2010 8:28:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie, on your 8th place. Agape, MOses
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Date: 12/6/2010 4:34:00 AM
great images and congrats on your win!!!! a really good write Carrie...luv Michael
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Date: 12/6/2010 2:19:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of skat, Carrie
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Date: 12/5/2010 9:38:00 PM
Carrie~CONGRATULATIONS! And a super thank for the nice & amazing entry. I had so much fun pretending to ride out every haiku. Many of the haiku's had more meaning to them than I expected. God bless*luv~SKAT
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Date: 12/4/2010 1:04:00 PM
Wonderful memories in this terrific Haiku Carrie > good luck in the contest >> James :)
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Date: 12/4/2010 9:59:00 AM
I really like that last line of yours, Carrie-- what wonderful memories to gather though despite being sunburned ;) enjoyed reading this --a winner for sure :) -- hugs nikko :)
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Date: 12/3/2010 11:26:00 AM
Amazing. Enjoyed reading your poetry today Carrie and I wish you the best in the contest. Have a wonderful weekend filled with love and inspiration. I wish to thank you for your kind comment it was appreciated. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/3/2010 10:06:00 AM
you make me want to play and romp with this superb 'ku, carrie! i'll bet on this one for the contest! warmest, nette
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Date: 12/3/2010 9:49:00 AM
What a perfect image Carrie, I am looking forward to enjoy Summer just relaxing at the beach.. Your words just gave me a preview.. All the best with this great Haiku - love Wilma
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Date: 12/3/2010 8:28:00 AM
So many great memories of summer are swept to sea before winter arrives, Carrie. Perhps you were once this "sunburned, sleeping child." A lovely haiku, my friend. Peace and blessings, Carolyn
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Date: 12/3/2010 8:18:00 AM
Really a superb meaningful write on sandcastles ;;; sunburned. what a nice image
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Date: 12/3/2010 8:18:00 AM
Oh wish I could go to a beach right now Carrie as its in the 20's here on the East Coast up and down the I-95 corridor... bbbrrr... this Haiku has warmed my heart today with its message .. so sweet.. good luck in the contest my friend.. my entry is Love Castles in the Sand... about luv of course..what else...haha..
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Date: 12/3/2010 8:13:00 AM
This brings to my mind a hundred thoughts,Carrie.Great haiku
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