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Summer Memory --Sandcastles--

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                    sunburned, sleeping child--

                    another summer memory

                    is swept out to sea

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/7/2010 3:16:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/7/2010 5:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Carrie in S K A T*s "Sandcastle Haiku"contest. Love,Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/6/2010 9:59:00 PM

ONe of the most haiku-ish ones I have seen. LOVE THIS.

Kash Poet

Date: 12/6/2010 7:01:00 PM

Congrats Carrie on your win-kashinath

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/6/2010 3:38:00 PM

Congrats Carrie on another big win in Irma's contest with this exceptional entry luv.. enjoy another top ten sweet success tonight with luv..

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/6/2010 12:16:00 PM

good to see your name out there, Carrie and all the best.

John Freeman

Date: 12/6/2010 8:28:00 AM

Congratulations Carrie, on your 8th place. Agape, MOses

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/6/2010 4:34:00 AM

great images and congrats on your win!!!! a really good write Carrie...luv Michael

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/6/2010 2:19:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of skat, Carrie

Skat A

Date: 12/5/2010 9:38:00 PM

Carrie~CONGRATULATIONS! And a super thank for the nice & amazing entry. I had so much fun pretending to ride out every haiku. Many of the haiku's had more meaning to them than I expected. God bless*luv~SKAT

James Fraser

Date: 12/4/2010 1:04:00 PM

Wonderful memories in this terrific Haiku Carrie > good luck in the contest >> James :)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/4/2010 9:59:00 AM

I really like that last line of yours, Carrie-- what wonderful memories to gather though despite being sunburned ;) enjoyed reading this --a winner for sure :) -- hugs nikko :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/3/2010 11:26:00 AM

Amazing. Enjoyed reading your poetry today Carrie and I wish you the best in the contest. Have a wonderful weekend filled with love and inspiration. I wish to thank you for your kind comment it was appreciated. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/3/2010 10:06:00 AM

you make me want to play and romp with this superb 'ku, carrie! i'll bet on this one for the contest! warmest, nette

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/3/2010 9:49:00 AM

What a perfect image Carrie, I am looking forward to enjoy Summer just relaxing at the beach.. Your words just gave me a preview.. All the best with this great Haiku - love Wilma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/3/2010 8:28:00 AM

So many great memories of summer are swept to sea before winter arrives, Carrie. Perhps you were once this "sunburned, sleeping child." A lovely haiku, my friend. Peace and blessings, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/3/2010 8:18:00 AM

Really a superb meaningful write on sandcastles ;;; sunburned. what a nice image

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/3/2010 8:18:00 AM

Oh wish I could go to a beach right now Carrie as its in the 20's here on the East Coast up and down the I-95 corridor... bbbrrr... this Haiku has warmed my heart today with its message .. so sweet.. good luck in the contest my friend.. my entry is Love Castles in the Sand... about luv of course..what else...haha..