Summer Memories On a Farm

He is mixing blue and purple on a portrait--me
while gulping coffee
of which water fetched from an old well

A figure taking shape on canvas 
Wild strokes my hair
two sparkling dots my eyes

It feels so quiet here on a so quiet farm
Amid the mirror-shine mountain ridge
Not hearing a note from a bird, nor from a rooster

Mr. Brown's head tilting, eyes narrowing 
Skinny paint brush against his mustache
long ashes falling off the dying cigarette
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dillenbeck Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 8:01 PM
I find this compelling, partly because you make choices that irritate me, like sand causing a pearl to develop. But, really, I did think a rooster was a type of bird. (Jus messin' wid ya)
Salehi Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 11:48 PM
THIS IS VERY NICE, BEAUTIFUL FREE VERSE, ACROSTIC I DO NOT KNOW...
A  Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 12:18 PM
epic write
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