Hansteven Selfa Poet Ode

Summer Love

A summer love, so riant and so warm 
Underneath the rays of gold 
Though covered with sudor, I want to be around your arms 
Forever is nothing but what I hold 
 
And yes, it was but summer 
Goodbyes are kept until we're home again 
We spent the season out of the boundary 
But it wasn't like what I remembered 
And so I yearned for home, refrain  
The way back home is my quandary

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Constance La France January 26, 2016 at 8:52 AM Hans, oh those summer loves of youth, so hard to say goodbye, lovely poem ~

Janice Canerdy January 26, 2016 at 8:50 AM A 7 for sure! Good job on this emotional write . . . Janice Hansteven Selfa January 26, 2016 at 8:52 AM Thank You :)

Anne-Lise Andresen January 26, 2016 at 8:49 AM - Hansteven, summer comes and summer go ..... many memories - A great poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Hansteven Selfa January 26, 2016 at 8:52 AM Thank You :)

Wilma Neels January 21, 2016 at 5:59 AM Awesome write Hansteven :) Hansteven Selfa January 26, 2016 at 8:52 AM Thank You :)

Harry Horsman January 20, 2016 at 11:10 AM Interesting poem, and a joy to read... Hansteven Selfa January 26, 2016 at 8:52 AM Thank You :)

Duke Beaufort January 17, 2016 at 11:29 AM So many mixed feelings. You have such a palette of expression--remarkable, sir. Hansteven Selfa January 26, 2016 at 8:52 AM Thank You :)