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Summer Love

Free and easy 
So they say 
Not knowing or caring 
Your eyes meet 
Your fingers touch 
You light that spark
As you get caught up
In each other's words 
You feel that electricity 
It's all around you 
Burning through your skin 
Sweet sensations engulf 
You into bliss

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Rachel St.Cross

November 1, 2012 at 1:19 PM

‡ I Can Feel Tremors Building Inside Just Being Near To Such Beauty, Sweet Beautiful Debbie. 'Burning Through Your Skin, Sweet Sensations Engulf, You Into Bliss.' Tis As A Bloody Mary Without The Vodka Although These Words Alone ? Tis When We Touch Taste And Feel That The True Fires Are Fulfilled; That They Burn But Yesss, Sweet Is Prelude, To Pure Ecstasies. My Love, Always, Rachel *

Debbie Duncan

November 4, 2012 at 4:33 PM

Thank you Rachel ;}

Rachel St.Cross

October 19, 2012 at 3:31 PM

* I Love The Way That This Wonderfully Passion Laced Poem Starts In Silent Lucidity Per Se And Then Quickly Builds Unto A Petal To The Metal Kind Of Love's Moment Burning Up The Shore. Heart's On Fire, My Dear Sweet Beautiful Debbie Duncan. Beautiful And Thank You For Your Kind Visit; Shall Do And You Too. My Love, Rachel *

Debbie Duncan

October 19, 2012 at 6:50 PM

Thank you Rachel for your sweet words ;}

Carol Eastman

July 29, 2012 at 6:56 PM

I can almost see the sighs of a youthful summer love. Great write.

Debbie Duncan

July 29, 2012 at 7:10 PM

Thank you Carol,,,,,, I never liked this when I wrote it,,,, always thought something was missing. you have a blessed day ;}

Matthew Anish

July 18, 2012 at 8:47 PM

Reminds me of the song "Fever"which has the lyrics - "What a lovely way to burn". You seem to be saying the same thing in your evocative words. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Debbie Duncan

July 18, 2012 at 9:36 PM

Hey Matthew,,, I love that song " Fever" Ella Fitzgerald does it very well ,,, Madonna did it too,,,, as well as others,,,,, thank you for reading,,,, have a great day ;}

Željko Sitar

July 16, 2012 at 1:52 AM

Yes, summer love is every word you wrote in this beautiful poem. Love from Croatia!!! (We have beautiful sea and beautiful summer) :)))))

Debbie Duncan

July 16, 2012 at 1:51 PM

Thank you,,,, wrote it as I was watching an old romance movie ,,,,,,Croatia sounds nice place to go on vacation,,, you have a great day ;}

Kerry Singleton

July 15, 2012 at 4:09 PM

Lovely & romantic great write Debbie :)

Dan Kearley

July 12, 2012 at 7:33 PM

Ahhhh,Yes...That spark! LOVE<3 (o: Very nice!

Debbie Duncan

July 13, 2012 at 3:25 AM

Thank you Dan,, ;}

Mohammad Yamin

July 11, 2012 at 5:31 PM

Wow! A charminh write Debbie. I like it. Thanks for your uplifting comments on my poem The Mother Earth. You are so kind. -Mohammad

Debbie Duncan

July 11, 2012 at 10:53 PM

Thank you Mohammad for reading my words,,

Rachel St.Cross

July 7, 2012 at 3:36 PM

‡ Wow, My Mind Could Journey Unto A Thousand Joyful Summer Shores Amid The Reflections Borne Amid This Beautiful Poem * Bliss, Sensations, Burning, Electricity, Love, Desire, Endless Beauty * Wrapped In Velvets Bliss * Shall I Whisper Now & Owww But I Must * You Are Beautiful * My Luv, Rachel ‡

Debbie Duncan

July 7, 2012 at 7:12 PM

Thank you Rachel,,,, wrote it in 6,13 ,2011,,, I always thought something was missing,,, you have a blessed day ;}

Keith Bickerstaffe

July 5, 2012 at 6:47 AM

Captured beautifully, Debbie! Strong emotions and sweet imagery. Best wishes, Keith

Robert Pettit

July 2, 2012 at 11:10 AM

Nice way to poetically describe that wonderful feeling we all get when we finally meet that special someone. This is a totally delightful read.

Sara Kendrick

June 29, 2012 at 12:38 PM

Oh! So passionate..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara

Elizabeth Wesley

June 19, 2012 at 8:48 PM

Lovely poetry, so full of emotion!

Carol Sunshine Brown

June 19, 2012 at 12:46 PM

What a beautiful day and what wonderful poetry I am enjoying reading today. Glad I came across this poem of yours and read it Debbie. Please keep posting so all can enjoy. Love, Carol

Debbie Duncan

June 19, 2012 at 8:46 PM

Thank you Carol ,,,,, you are always so sweet with your comments,,,, blessings of love to you .

Joann Grisetti

June 19, 2012 at 9:32 AM

A romantic read. Looking forward to more of yours.

Jeffry Cohan

June 19, 2012 at 8:21 AM

no lady, this poem engulfs me into bliss...just an emotional way to express what we all want and feel, some of us get it, some not....but at least we have this poem to bring us into bliss...yours in admiration..PHREEPOETREE ~free cee!~

Debbie Duncan

June 19, 2012 at 8:33 AM

Thank you jeffry ;} you have a blessed day !

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 18, 2012 at 1:08 PM

My heart melted for this lovely love poem Debbie, love it. - hug to you :)

Debbie Duncan

June 18, 2012 at 3:20 PM

Thank you Anne,,,, I always thought something was missing ,,, so I never posted it,,, I wrote 6 13 2012,,, I still think something is missing,, have a blessed day !