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summer lights

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For A Summer Haiku - Nature Themed Poetry Contest sponsored by Tania Kitchen

silent and crashing two lights - summer moon and waves' phosphorescent glow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/6/2024 1:14:00 PM
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"A glow in the dark that puts out little to no heat..." I am learning new vocabulary words all the time on PS! :) Descriptive, unique haiku! Love it! Xo
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/10/2024 1:49:00 PM
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Well shucks... stupid form rules! Lol xo
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David Crandall
Date: 7/6/2024 1:54:00 PM
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haha, thanks Crystol, now you've improved my understanding of that word. Actually, I've since found that a better choice of words is bioluminescent, but that is one too many syllables.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/3/2024 9:45:00 AM
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Lovely one . Congrats
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David Crandall
Date: 7/3/2024 5:15:00 PM
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Aw, thanks Andrea!
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Terry Miller
Date: 7/3/2024 3:51:00 AM
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Great haiku, congratulations
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David Crandall
Date: 7/3/2024 5:14:00 PM
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Thanks Terry!
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thriveni c mysore
Date: 7/2/2024 10:38:00 PM
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beautiful contrast. Congratulations dear poet.
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David Crandall
Date: 7/3/2024 5:14:00 PM
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Thanks Thriveni! Have you ever seen bioluminescent waves?
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/2/2024 4:23:00 PM
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David, congratulations on your winning placement, wonderful moon imagery.
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David Crandall
Date: 7/2/2024 4:43:00 PM
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Thank you Tania! It was great trying a haiku!

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