Summer Leisure

Lulled by the summer breeze enchantment He succumbed to sleep* dream's engagement First, he plunged to pool pleasure Ending with lounging leisure… Now, he prays against work retrenchment.
*Proverbs 20:13 Love not sleep, lest thou come to poverty; open thine eyes, and thou shalt be satisfied with bread. June 13, 2020 Honorable Mention, "Summer Laziness" Limerick Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Mohan Chutani; judged on 6/18/2020.
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Mishra Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 1:20 AM
I love your fun and soothing limerick Beata. Congratulations on your win :)
Chutani Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 8:55 PM
Beata, congratulations for your placement in my contest. Best. Mohan.
Cunningham Avatar
June 13, 2020 at 3:44 PM
Nice one Beata, when the weather is nice all you want to do is laze by the pool. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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