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Summer Laziness

In Florida donuts all ‘round — the whirlpool of kids as “bigs” frowned. The force of the push did wimple their tush and throw them all off and they drowned. 6/10/2020 Contest: SUMMER LAZINESS Sponsor: Mohan chutani

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/22/2020 1:13:00 AM

I know that situation when kids just plunge themselves on anything. Though I feel like eating donuts now. Congratulations on your win for this amusing limerick. Blessings and love Kim :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/22/2020 5:06:00 AM

LOL, Aditi! That visual of donuts we can’t get past especially sprinkled with confetti colors :)

Mohan Chutani

Date: 6/18/2020 8:44:00 PM

Kim, congratulations for your placement in my contest. Best. Mohan.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/18/2020 9:33:00 PM

Thank you, Mohan!

Funom Makama

Date: 6/15/2020 3:37:00 PM

Remarkable lines, true words, amazing piece from a very deep and wise mind. I love every bit of this. Great work Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/18/2020 9:33:00 PM

Thank you, Funom!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 6/10/2020 11:06:00 PM

now 'wimple their tush' will be stuck in my head - not such a bad thing, though!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/11/2020 5:00:00 AM

LOL...we have words come to mind. This like a nursery rhyme...like ring around the rosies, likewise dark in the end (of history that is)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 6/10/2020 9:55:00 PM

Heh heh heh, I think I may have enjoyed this a little too much ;), xomo! (winner for me!)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/11/2020 5:01:00 AM

LOL, Mo! ;)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/10/2020 6:49:00 PM

You've got a bit of Mother Goose in you, methinks... That last line sure is a zinger!! G.L. in the contest! :) gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/11/2020 5:01:00 AM

Like ring around the rosies. Old grouches imagined by the young to take that deep dive ;)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/10/2020 6:50:00 PM

Thank you! :)